Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural but too brief and lacks supporting details. Try to provide a clear topic sentence followed by reasons or examples to make your response more effective and informative.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For instance, I often sing my favorite songs when I feel stressed, which makes me feel better.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words and correcting grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and provide more specific reasons.

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I don't like the sound of my voice. Therefore, I believe I am not good at singing and prefer to enjoy it casually.

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly respond to the question. Try to provide a clear topic sentence and explain your feelings or reasons with supporting details.

예시: Actually, I don't usually sing for others because I feel shy about my voice. However, I sometimes sing alone at home for my own enjoyment.

제안: Your answer has a good idea but contains grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use linking words properly and correct sentence structure to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because when I sing or listen to songs, I feel very relaxed and cheerful. For example, music often lifts my mood after a long day.

× No, I never learned how to sing because I don't like my voice and I think I Can't Sing.

✓ No, I never learned how to sing because I don't like my voice and I think I can't sing.

The modal verb 'can't' should not be capitalized in the middle of a sentence. Modal verbs like 'can' and 'can't' are always lowercase unless they start a sentence.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

The student's response 'I don't think so.' does not answer the question 'Who do you want to sing for?'. It is a sentence structure and relevance issue rather than a grammar mistake. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, no correction is applied here.

× Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people because then I singing or listening to song I feel so relaxed.

✓ Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I am singing or listening to songs, I feel so relaxed.

The phrase 'then I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'when I am singing' to correctly use the present continuous tense. Also, 'listening to song' should be 'listening to songs' to match plural form. The word 'then' is incorrect here and should be 'when' to indicate the time condition.