Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法，如使用正确的时态和冠词。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing when I am alone, especially in the shower. It makes me feel relaxed and free because I can sing loudly without worrying about being judged.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和动词形式，并且表达更连贯。

예시: I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I often watch online videos to improve my singing skills when I have free time.

제안: 回答不够明确，表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，说明想为谁唱歌，并用清晰的句子表达原因。

예시: I would like to sing for myself because it helps me relax and gives me a sense of accomplishment.

제안: 回答中有多处语法和拼写错误，且表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，正确使用词汇，并直接回答问题。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When I improve my skills, I can sing beautiful songs that soothe others and make them feel joyful.

× I like singing when I alone, especially taking a shower.

✓ I like singing when I am alone, especially when taking a shower.

句中缺少动词，导致句子结构不完整。'I alone'应改为'I am alone'，表示“我独自一人”。

× I like singing when I alone, especially taking a shower.

✓ I like singing when I am alone, especially when taking a shower.

'especially taking a shower'缺少介词，应该加上'when'表示时间状语，改为'especially when taking a shower'。

× I haven't learned how to sing but when I was free and I usually watching the video about the lesson in this area which can help me song help me sing better.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing but when I am free, I usually watch videos about lessons in this area which can help me sing better.

时态混乱，'was free'与'usually watching'不匹配，应该统一为一般现在时。'watching'应改为动词原形'watch'，因为前面有副词usually。

× I haven't learned how to sing but when I was free and I usually watching the video about the lesson in this area which can help me song help me sing better.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing but when I am free, I usually watch videos about lessons in this area which can help me sing better.

'about the lesson in this area'表达不自然，改为'videos about lessons in this area'更符合英语习惯。

× I haven't learned how to sing but when I was free and I usually watching the video about the lesson in this area which can help me song help me sing better.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing but when I am free, I usually watch videos about lessons in this area which can help me sing better.

句中'song help me sing better'重复且错误，应删除多余的'song'。

× It is a good question, I would like to think for myself, which made me relaxing and I can indulging in the sense of success.

✓ It is a good question. I would like to think for myself, which makes me relaxed and allows me to indulge in the sense of success.

句子逗号连接两个独立句，应该用句号分开。'made me relaxing'时态和形式错误，应改为'makes me relaxed'。'can indulging'动词形式错误，应改为'allows me to indulge'。

× It is a good question, I would like to think for myself, which made me relaxing and I can indulging in the sense of success.

✓ It is a good question. I would like to think for myself, which makes me relaxed and allows me to indulge in the sense of success.

'relaxing'是现在分词，表示使人放松的，句中应使用形容词'relaxed'表示感受。

× Seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people.

单词拼写错误，'Seeing'应为'Singing'，意思是“唱歌”。

× When I have a excellent skills, I can sing a beautiful song to other people which can soothing their minds and make them indulging my my ambulance.

✓ When I have excellent skills, I can sing a beautiful song to other people which can soothe their minds and make them indulge in my ambiance.

'a excellent skills'中冠词与复数名词不匹配，应去掉'a'。

× When I have a excellent skills, I can sing a beautiful song to other people which can soothing their minds and make them indulging my my ambulance.

✓ When I have excellent skills, I can sing a beautiful song to other people which can soothe their minds and make them indulge in my ambiance.

'soothing'应为动词原形'soothe'，'indulging'应改为动词原形'indulge'，且后面应加介词'in'。

× When I have a excellent skills, I can sing a beautiful song to other people which can soothing their minds and make them indulging my my ambulance.

✓ When I have excellent skills, I can sing a beautiful song to other people which can soothe their minds and make them indulge in my ambiance.

'my my ambulance'拼写错误，应为'my ambiance'，表示“我的氛围”。