Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and expresses your feelings well, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, instead of "singing show up the light for me," you could say "singing brightens my mood."

예시: Yes, I love singing because it brightens my mood when I'm feeling sad or depressed.

제안: Try to avoid filler words like "umm" and "uh" and organize your answer more clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details. For example, explain how you sing along with songs and why you haven't had time to practice.

예시: No, I haven't formally learned how to sing. I usually sing along with my favorite songs at home, but I haven't had time to practice or take lessons.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more structured and natural. Avoid repeating "for me" and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, clarify your thoughts about singing for yourself.

예시: I would like to sing for my loved ones, such as my family and friends, because they enjoy listening to me. Additionally, I sometimes sing for myself to relax and feel happy.

제안: Your answer is good but could be more fluent and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, explain how singing helps express emotions and brings happiness.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and feelings through music, which can be very uplifting.

× I think singing makes me feel happy when I'm sad and depressed and singing show up the light for me.

✓ I think singing makes me feel happy when I'm sad and depressed and singing shows up the light for me.

The verb 'show' should be in the third person singular form 'shows' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving verb conjugation in the present tense.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is a British English past participle form, while 'learned' is the American English form. Since the rest of the text uses American English conventions, 'learned' is preferred here for consistency.

× I just listened to sound and I just sing alone.

✓ I just listened to sounds and I just sing alone.

The noun 'sound' should be plural 'sounds' to correctly refer to multiple sounds heard. Also, 'listened to' requires an object, and 'sounds' fits better here.

× I didn't have any time to practice my singing.

✓ I haven't had any time to practice my singing.

Since the question uses present perfect 'Have you ever learnt', the answer should also use present perfect to indicate experience up to now. 'Didn't have' is simple past and implies a finished time, which is less appropriate here.

× Probably it's for my loved ones.

✓ Probably it's for my loved ones.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I think my family really enjoys watching me singing and also my friends and for me, I would love to sing for me.

✓ I think my family really enjoys watching me sing, and also my friends. As for me, I would love to sing for myself.

The phrase 'watching me singing' should be 'watching me sing' because after verbs like 'watch', the base form of the verb is used. Also, 'sing for me' is incorrect when referring to oneself; the reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used.

× I think my family really enjoys watching me singing and also my friends and for me, I would love to sing for me.

✓ I think my family really enjoys watching me sing, and also my friends. As for me, I would love to sing for myself.

After verbs like 'enjoy', the gerund form is used, but after 'watching me', the verb following should be the base form 'sing', not 'singing'. Also, the sentence was long and unclear, so splitting it improves clarity.

× Yes, it can express our emotions, our mind with the song.

✓ Yes, it can express our emotions and our minds with the song.

The phrase 'our mind' should be plural 'our minds' to agree with 'our emotions'. Also, 'and' is needed to connect the two objects properly.