Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains errors, such as confusing 'singing' with 'swimming'. To improve, directly answer the question with a clear opinion, avoid irrelevant or incorrect words, and keep your response concise and natural.

예시: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult and not very enjoyable for me.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. To improve, complete your sentences, use correct grammar, and provide specific details about your experience with singing classes.

예시: Yes, I took singing classes at school and practiced regularly, but I found it challenging to improve my skills.

제안: Your answer is generally good but contains some awkward phrasing and minor errors. To improve, use clearer expressions and correct pronouns, and try to link your ideas smoothly.

예시: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because it feels more personal. They know me well and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to keep improving.

제안: Your answer shows your opinion but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, express your ideas clearly, avoid unnecessary words, and use correct grammar.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and feel joyful.

× Umm, no, I don't like swimming. Uh, I consider it as a nose breathing or sharp thrilling.

✓ Umm, no, I don't like singing. Uh, I consider it like nose breathing or sharp thrilling.

The student mistakenly said 'swimming' instead of 'singing', which is the topic of the question. Also, 'consider it as' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'consider it like' or 'consider it as' without 'as' in this context. The phrase 'a nose breathing or sharp thrilling' is awkward; 'nose breathing' is not a common expression here, and 'sharp thrilling' is an incorrect adjective use. It should be 'like nose breathing or a sharp thrill' or similar. The correction focuses on replacing 'swimming' with 'singing' and adjusting the phrase to be more natural.

× Uh yes, in my school there was a classes for singing but I practice a lot but I couldn't able to make it well so I.

✓ Uh yes, in my school there were classes for singing but I practiced a lot but I couldn't make it well so I.

The phrase 'there was a classes' is incorrect because 'classes' is plural and requires 'were' instead of 'was'. Also, 'couldn't able to' is redundant; 'couldn't' alone suffices. The verb 'practice' should be in past tense 'practiced' to match the past context. The sentence is incomplete at the end, but the correction focuses on the grammatical errors identified.

× I would like to inform my family and close friends. Singing for them feels more personal and meaningful because they know we well and appreciate my efforts.

✓ I would like to inform my family and close friends. Singing for them feels more personal and meaningful because they know me well and appreciate my efforts.

The pronoun 'we' is incorrectly used instead of 'me' when referring to oneself. 'They know me well' is the correct form. This is a common pronoun error where the subject pronoun is mistakenly used instead of the object pronoun.

× Moreover, their support and encouragement motivate me to improve and inspire the experience even more.

✓ Moreover, their support and encouragement motivate me to improve and inspire the experience even more.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No correction needed.

× Yes, I think like singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people.

The phrase 'I think like singing' is incorrect. The word 'like' is unnecessary here and should be removed. The correct phrase is 'I think singing can bring happiness to people.'

× Uh, and sometimes the sadness could be teaching to happiness and smiling.

✓ Uh, and sometimes sadness can lead to happiness and smiling.

The phrase 'the sadness could be teaching to happiness and smiling' is awkward and incorrect. 'Teaching to' is not a correct prepositional phrase here. A better expression is 'sadness can lead to happiness and smiling.' Also, 'the sadness' is better as 'sadness' without 'the' in this context.

× So yes, I think the singing can bring happiness to that people.

✓ So yes, I think singing can bring happiness to those people.

The phrase 'the singing' is incorrect here; 'singing' as a general activity does not need 'the'. Also, 'that people' is incorrect; the correct demonstrative pronoun for plural is 'those'. Therefore, the correct sentence is 'I think singing can bring happiness to those people.'