Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“see”应为“hear”或“listen to”，且句子结构略显重复，建议使用更准确的词汇并简化表达，使语言更自然流畅。

예시: I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and forget the stress of daily life. Whenever I listen to my favorite songs, I feel happy and satisfied.

제안: 回答结构清晰，但可以增加连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免使用模糊词汇如“maybe”，增强自信表达。

예시: I haven't received formal singing lessons; instead, I learn by imitating my favorite singers' recordings. I believe I have a natural talent, so I think I sing quite well.

제안: 回答中多次使用“and”开头，显得不够自然，建议用更合适的连接词或直接陈述，避免重复，使表达更简洁。

예시: I want to sing for my mother because she has always supported and cared for me unconditionally. Singing a song is my way to express gratitude and show my love for her.

제안: 回答中多次出现“seeing”错误，应为“singing”，且句子重复且不够连贯，建议纠正词汇错误，使用连接词并丰富细节，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can uplift people's spirits. When they sing, they can forget their troubles and focus on the music, which helps them relax and escape the monotony of daily life.

× Every time I see my favorite songs, I will have a sense of joy and satisfaction.

✓ Every time I see my favorite songs, I have a sense of joy and satisfaction.

这里描述的是一种习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时，而不是将来时。将来时“will have”不符合语境。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

“learnt”和“learned”都是“learn”的过去分词，但在美式英语中更常用“learned”。根据语境和习惯，建议使用“learned”。

× I haven't studied how to sing in a systematic way.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing in a systematic way.

这里用“studied”不太合适，通常学习唱歌用“learned”更准确，且与上文问题呼应。

× Maybe I just have a certain aptitude, so I think I sing pretty well.

✓ Maybe I just have a certain aptitude, so I think I sing pretty well.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× she always supported me and cared for me unconditionally.

✓ she has always supported me and cared for me unconditionally.

描述持续到现在的动作，应该用现在完成时“has always supported”，而不是一般过去时“supported”。

× Yes, I think seeing can uplift people's spirit.

✓ Yes, I think singing can uplift people's spirits.

“seeing”应为“singing”，且“spirit”应为复数“spirits”，表示人们的精神状态。

× When they are seeing, they can forget troubles in their stressful life and just concentrate on seeing a song.

✓ When they are singing, they can forget troubles in their stressful life and just concentrate on singing a song.

“seeing”应为“singing”，动词形式错误。

× just concentrate on seeing a song.

✓ just concentrate on singing a song.

“concentrate on”后应接动名词形式，故“seeing”应改为“singing”。