Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words for coherence. For example, avoid repeating similar ideas and focus on expressing your feelings clearly.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I have free time. However, I usually sing along with music in the background since I feel shy singing alone without it.

제안: Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, try to be more specific about why you want to learn singing and how it benefits you.

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I would like to because singing is an enjoyable hobby that helps me feel happy and relaxed.

제안: Make your answer clearer and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to structure your response and provide specific reasons why singing for your girlfriend is important to you.

예시: I want to sing for my girlfriend because it is a special way to express my feelings. In fact, it is one of my biggest dreams and something I hope to do soon.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and completing your last sentence. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons or examples.

예시: Yes, absolutely. Happiness can be achieved in many ways, and singing is one of them because it helps relieve stress and makes our mind feel free and relaxed, allowing us to forget our problems for a while.

× I am a person who love to listen music when I'm free

✓ I am a person who loves to listen to music when I'm free

The verb 'love' should be in third person singular form 'loves' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. Also, the verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before 'music'.

× I am a person who love to listen music when I'm free

✓ I am a person who loves to listen to music when I'm free

The verb 'listen' is always followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating what is being listened to. Omitting 'to' is incorrect.

× I usually sing along with the music in the background

✓ I usually sing along to the music in the background

The correct preposition to use with 'sing along' is 'to', not 'with'. 'Sing along to the music' is the standard expression.

× I love to sing alone because I feel like quite shy when people are around me

✓ I love to sing alone because I feel quite shy when people are around me

The phrase 'feel like quite shy' is incorrect. 'Feel' should be followed directly by the adjective 'quite shy' without 'like' in this context.

× No, I have not learned how to sing, but I love to learn singing

✓ No, I have not learned how to sing, but I love to learn to sing

The verb 'learn' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to sing' rather than the gerund 'singing' in this context.

× it can make make our ourself happy and feel relaxed

✓ it can make ourselves happy and feel relaxed

The reflexive pronoun 'ourself' is incorrect; the correct form is 'ourselves' for the plural pronoun 'our'.

× I do want to sing for my girlfriend because it's the biggest dream for me

✓ I do want to sing for my girlfriend because it's the biggest dream of mine

The phrase 'the biggest dream for me' is less natural; 'the biggest dream of mine' correctly expresses possession.

× which I consider that singing for my girlfriend is like a biggest thing or the big thing

✓ which I consider that singing for my girlfriend is like the biggest thing or a big thing

The article 'a' should be used before 'biggest thing' only if it is not definite; 'the biggest thing' is correct for a superlative. Also, 'a big thing' is correct for a general statement.

× it's always in the bucket list for a boyfriend

✓ it's always on the bucket list for a boyfriend

The correct preposition with 'bucket list' is 'on', not 'in'.

× I think that's a quite good thing for everyone

✓ I think that's quite a good thing for everyone

The adverb 'quite' should precede the article 'a' in this phrase for correct word order.

× I think that happiness can be attained in multiple multiple ways

✓ I think that happiness can be attained in multiple ways

The word 'multiple' is repeated unnecessarily; it should appear only once.

× so that we can be ourself and get rid of the all pressures and problems in our

✓ so that we can be ourselves and get rid of all the pressures and problems in our lives

The reflexive pronoun 'ourself' is incorrect; 'ourselves' is correct for plural. Also, 'the all pressures' is incorrect; it should be 'all the pressures'. The sentence is incomplete and needs 'lives' to complete the meaning.