Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和表达重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: Yes, I like singing because I enjoy listening to music. When I hear a good song, I often find myself singing along without realizing it.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在重复和不连贯的地方。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达愿望和原因。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I just sing naturally, but I hope to learn from a teacher so I can improve and share my singing on social media.

제안: 回答内容较好，但语句有些重复且不够流畅。建议使用更简洁的表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I usually sing for myself since I'm not a professional singer. However, I enjoy singing 'Happy Birthday' to friends during their celebrations because it brings joy to everyone.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有误，句子结构不够清晰。建议注意语法正确性，使用恰当的连接词，使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness, especially at parties, karaoke, or birthdays. It's not about singing perfectly, but about creating a joyful atmosphere that everyone enjoys.

× When you listening to a great music, you will tend to sing it aloud consciously unconsciousness.

✓ When you listen to great music, you will tend to sing it aloud consciously or unconsciously.

这里的动词应该用原形listen，因为在条件状语从句中，动词不需要加-ing形式。并且music是不可数名词，不需要加冠词a。

× I just sing with my own talent, my own, my own function.

✓ I just sing with my own talent, my own ability.

function用法不当，应该用ability表示能力。

× Maybe. But I hope I can have somebody to teach me how to sing because I want to post it on my social media and get likes from others.

✓ Maybe. But I hope I can have somebody teach me how to sing because I want to post videos on my social media and get likes from others.

have somebody do sth结构中，to不需要。post后面应该接复数名词videos更合适。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误，符合口语习惯。

× The atmosphere, everyone's enjoy, that is the most important things when singing.

✓ The atmosphere, everyone's enjoyment, that is the most important thing when singing.

things应改为thing，因为主语是单数。everyone's后面应为名词enjoyment而非动词enjoy。