Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态混用和句子结构不完整。建议注意时态一致性，简洁表达观点，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and have fun with my friends. Although I'm not very good at it, I always try my best to improve by practicing regularly.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，且表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态，简洁明了地表达是否学习过唱歌。

예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have watched some tutorial videos on YouTube to learn basic techniques.

제안: 回答句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议分句表达，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually sing for myself, but I also enjoy singing for my friends on their birthdays. Additionally, when we go to karaoke in the car, we often sing to each other for fun.

제안: 表达中有语法和用词错误，建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达感受。

예시: Yes, singing always makes me feel energetic and happy. I believe it can bring joy to many people.

× And every time I went to the karaoke I would try to.

✓ And every time I go to the karaoke I try to.

这里描述的是习惯性的动作，应该使用一般现在时而不是过去时。

× So I think I like sing, but I'm not good at singing so I'm hard working to improve.

✓ So I think I like singing, but I'm not good at singing so I'm working hard to improve.

动词like后面应该接动名词形式singing；短语'hard working'应改为'working hard'，形容词和副词顺序错误。

× No I don't, but I had watched some videos of how to sing in the. YouTube, but I had never learned it.

✓ No, I don't, but I have watched some videos on how to sing on YouTube, but I have never learned it.

这里描述的是过去到现在的经历，应该用现在完成时have watched和have never learned，而不是过去完成时had watched和had never learned。

× No I don't, but I had watched some videos of how to sing in the. YouTube, but I had never learned it.

✓ No, I don't, but I have watched some videos on how to sing on YouTube, but I have never learned it.

介词用法错误，应该用'on YouTube'表示在YouTube上观看视频，而不是'in the YouTube'。

× when my friends are in their birthday I will sing for them

✓ when my friends have their birthdays I will sing for them

birthday是可数名词，复数形式应为birthdays，且表达朋友们的生日时应使用复数。

× and also when my friend with me we went to the car karaoke we will sing to each other I think.

✓ and also when my friend and I go to the car karaoke, we sing to each other, I think.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词和正确的时态，应该使用一般现在时描述习惯动作，并且补充连词使句子通顺。

× Yes, every time I sing I feel like some energetic feeling up with me and I feel very happy and excited to sing.

✓ Yes, every time I sing I feel some energetic feeling come up in me and I feel very happy and excited to sing.

短语'feel like some energetic feeling up with me'表达不正确，应该改为'feel some energetic feeling come up in me'，使表达更自然。