Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'I don't usually seeing and I love.' Try to make your sentences clearer and more grammatically correct. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I'm alone in my room or taking a bath. I find it relaxing and it helps me unwind. However, I don't usually sing in public because I'm a bit shy. I also like listening to music, but not very often.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by correcting grammar and adding linking words for coherence. For example, use 'I have never had the chance to learn because...' Also, try to provide a bit more detail to enrich your response.

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing. This is because I come from a conservative family that does not encourage singing or dancing. Therefore, I never had the chance to take any singing lessons.

제안: Your answer is clear and direct but could be improved by adding supporting details and linking words to make it more natural and engaging. For example, explain why you want to sing for them or how it makes you feel.

예시: I want to sing for my mom and my loved ones because it makes me happy to express my feelings through music. Singing for them is a way to show my appreciation and love.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion more clearly and use proper sentence structure. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'just entertain things.' Instead, explain your thoughts with specific reasons or examples.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music often lifts people's spirits. For me, singing is a form of entertainment that helps me relax and feel joyful.

× Otherwise I don't usually seeing and I love.

✓ Otherwise I don't usually sing and I love it.

The verb 'seeing' is incorrectly used after 'don't usually'. The correct form is the base verb 'sing' because modal verbs and auxiliary verbs like 'do' are followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form.

× I love to hear music but not that much.

✓ I love to hear music, but not that much.

A comma is needed before 'but' to separate two independent clauses for clarity and correct punctuation.

× So that's why I never have chance to learn a thing.

✓ So that's why I never had a chance to learn anything.

The phrase 'never have chance' is incorrect. The past tense 'had' should be used because the context refers to a past situation. Also, 'a chance' requires the article 'a', and 'anything' is more appropriate than 'a thing' in this context.

× Maybe it can, but for me it is just entertain things.

✓ Maybe it can, but for me it is just entertaining things.

The word 'entertain' is a verb, but here an adjective or gerund form is needed to describe 'things'. 'Entertaining' is the correct form to use as an adjective to describe 'things'.

× So yeah, it can bring happiness to people as long as it brings for mine.

✓ So yeah, it can bring happiness to people as long as it brings happiness to me.

The phrase 'brings for mine' is incorrect. 'Mine' is a possessive pronoun and cannot be used here. The correct phrase is 'brings happiness to me' to clearly express the meaning.