Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表達了喜歡唱歌的原因，但句子結構稍顯重複且有語法錯誤。建議使用更自然的句型，避免重複使用 "it can"，並注意單複數和冠詞的使用。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me happy and helps me relieve stress from work and school.

제안: 回答中語法錯誤較多，句子不通順，且表達不夠清晰。建議簡化句子，使用正確的動詞形式和連接詞，並清楚表達自己的意思。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I prefer listening to songs online. Also, I am not very confident about my voice, so singing is just a hobby for me.

제안: 回答中有多處語法和用詞錯誤，句意不清晰。建議使用簡單明確的句子，正確使用介詞和代詞，並清楚表達想為誰唱歌及原因。

예시: I want to sing for my family because they always encourage me and help me solve different problems. Singing for them is my way to show my love and appreciation.

제안: 回答中有多處拼寫錯誤（如 "seeing" 應為 "singing"），語法錯誤和表達不清。建議注意拼寫，使用正確的句型，並用連接詞使句子更連貫。

예시: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because it is an exciting activity. Many people sing in the bathroom or car to enjoy life, relieve stress, and express their feelings.

× Yes, I like singing because it can make me feel happy and it can let me relieve my stress from work and schools.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it can make me feel happy and it can help me relieve my stress from work and school.

The phrase 'let me relieve' is incorrect here; 'help me relieve' is more appropriate. Also, 'schools' should be singular 'school' because it refers to the general concept of school as a place of study, not multiple schools. Using 'help me relieve' correctly expresses assistance in reducing stress.

× No, I've not learned about singing because I prefer to listening at online, therefore I also not more confident about my voice, so singing is my hobbies.

✓ No, I haven't learned about singing because I prefer listening online; therefore, I am also not very confident about my voice, so singing is my hobby.

The correct negative present perfect form is 'I haven't learned' instead of 'I've not learned'. 'Prefer to listening' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer listening'. 'At online' is wrong preposition usage; 'online' does not need a preposition. 'I also not more confident' is incorrect; it should be 'I am also not very confident'. 'Singing is my hobbies' is wrong because 'hobbies' is plural but 'singing' is singular; it should be 'hobby'.

× No, I've not learned about singing because I prefer to listening at online, therefore I also not more confident about my voice, so singing is my hobbies.

✓ No, I haven't learned about singing because I prefer listening online; therefore, I am also not very confident about my voice, so singing is my hobby.

The preposition 'at' before 'online' is incorrect. 'Online' is an adverb and does not require a preposition. The correct phrase is 'listening online'.

× No, I've not learned about singing because I prefer to listening at online, therefore I also not more confident about my voice, so singing is my hobbies.

✓ No, I haven't learned about singing because I prefer listening online; therefore, I am also not very confident about my voice, so singing is my hobby.

The word 'hobbies' is plural but should be singular 'hobby' because 'singing' is a singular activity. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I want to sing from my family because they encourage me about everything from life and help me to solve about different difficult.

✓ I want to sing for my family because they encourage me in everything in life and help me solve different difficulties.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect when expressing the beneficiary of an action; it should be 'for'. Also, 'encourage me about' should be 'encourage me in'. 'Help me to solve about' is incorrect; it should be 'help me solve'. 'Different difficult' is incorrect; it should be 'different difficulties'.

× I want to sing from my family because they encourage me about everything from life and help me to solve about different difficult.

✓ I want to sing for my family because they encourage me in everything in life and help me solve different difficulties.

The word 'difficult' is an adjective but is used as a noun here; the correct noun form is 'difficulties' and it should be plural to match 'different'.

× So I want to sing for them to impress my love to him to them.

✓ So I want to sing for them to express my love to them.

The phrase 'impress my love to him to them' is confusing and incorrect. The correct expression is 'express my love to them'. The pronouns 'him' and 'them' are misused and redundant here.

× So I want to sing for them to impress my love to him to them.

✓ So I want to sing for them to express my love to them.

The pronouns 'him' and 'them' are incorrectly used together, causing confusion. Use 'them' consistently to refer to the family.

× Yes, I think seeing can make people happy because that is very exciting thing for everyone.

✓ Yes, I think singing can make people happy because it is a very exciting thing for everyone.

The word 'seeing' is a typo or incorrect word; it should be 'singing'. Also, 'that' should be 'it' to refer to singing. 'Very exciting thing' needs an article 'a' before it.

× Many people always sing at bathroom or car, enjoy their life, so seeing can learn people relief and express them.

✓ Many people always sing in the bathroom or car, enjoy their life, so singing can help people relieve stress and express themselves.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect; it should be 'in' for enclosed spaces like 'bathroom' and 'car'. 'Seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. 'Learn people relief' is incorrect; it should be 'help people relieve stress'. 'Express them' should be 'express themselves'.