Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and lacks variety in vocabulary. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use more natural expressions. For example, instead of saying "I don't like singing" twice, you can say "I'm not fond of singing because I feel it's not my strength."

예시: I'm not fond of singing because I feel it's not my strength, so I usually avoid it.

제안: Your answer is direct but very short. You can improve by adding a little more detail and using linking words to make it more natural. For example, you can say "Actually, I have never learned how to sing because I never had the chance or interest."

예시: Actually, I have never learned how to sing because I never had the chance or interest.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. For example, "If I ever sing, it would be only for my husband because he is patient with my poor singing."

예시: If I ever sing, it would be only for my husband because he is patient with my poor singing.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. For example, "Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For instance, when people feel sad after a breakup, they often listen to music to feel better."

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For instance, when people feel sad after a breakup, they often listen to music to feel better.

× Actually not. I never learned how to sing.

✓ Actually, no. I have never learned how to sing.

The sentence uses 'never learned' which is simple past tense, but the context suggests an experience up to now, so present perfect 'have never learned' is more appropriate in English (Bangladesh). Also, 'Actually not' is incorrect; it should be 'Actually, no.'

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to the people sometimes I heard that when a people break without break up with his boyfriend then he or she listen to music and by this by this.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Sometimes I have heard that when a person breaks up with his boyfriend, he or she listens to music, and by this, they feel better.

The phrase 'a people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so 'a person' should be used for singular. Also, 'break without break up' is confusing and incorrect; it should be 'breaks up'. The verb 'listen' should be 'listens' to agree with singular subject 'he or she'. The sentence structure is also corrected for clarity in English (Bangladesh).