Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho câu trả lời thiếu tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, chính xác và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and feel more confident. Also, singing with my friends is very enjoyable as it allows us to connect and have fun together.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn và hiện tại hoàn thành một cách chính xác. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: No, I haven't taken any formal singing lessons. However, I have learned some singing techniques by watching videos on YouTube and using mobile apps.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi sai. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do bạn muốn hát cùng mẹ để câu trả lời thêm cụ thể.

예시: I want to sing with my mother because she is usually busy and doesn't have time to sing with me. I love her very much and I think singing together can help us relax and enjoy our time.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng các câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic. Hãy đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể và giải thích rõ hơn về lợi ích của việc hát.

예시: I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music helps us relax and feel good. When people sing, they often feel joyful and it improves their mood.

× Yes I glide singing.

✓ Yes, I like singing.

The verb 'glide' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'like' followed by the gerund 'singing' to express enjoyment of an activity.

× Seeing also allows me to connect with others especially when I try to show or sing with my friend which is very enjoyable.

✓ Singing also allows me to connect with others, especially when I try to sing with my friend, which is very enjoyable.

The word 'Seeing' is a typo or incorrect; it should be 'Singing' as the activity being discussed. Also, 'show or sing' is unclear; 'sing' alone fits better here.

× No, I haven't. I didn't learn something about how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't. I haven't learned anything about how to sing.

The present perfect tense 'haven't learned' is appropriate here to indicate experience up to now. 'Didn't learn something' is incorrect; 'haven't learned anything' is the correct form.

× In class for example, I just learn singing on YouTube or some apps. To singing.

✓ In class, for example, I just learn singing on YouTube or some apps.

The phrase 'To singing' is incorrect and unnecessary. Also, 'learn singing' is acceptable but could be improved to 'learn to sing' for clarity.

× Actually I want to sing with my mother, she always looking so didn't have time to singing with me.

✓ Actually, I want to sing with my mother. She is always busy and doesn't have time to sing with me.

The phrase 'she always looking' is incorrect; it should be 'she is always busy' or 'she is always looking busy'. Also, 'didn't have time to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'doesn't have time to sing'.

× So I want to sing with my mom because I very love her and I think I can help her to stretch.

✓ So I want to sing with my mom because I love her very much and I think I can help her to relax.

The phrase 'I very love her' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I love her very much'. Also, 'help her to stretch' is likely a misuse; 'help her to relax' fits better in context.

× For example music helps everyone relax so singing have to make it like music.

✓ For example, music helps everyone relax, so singing has to be like music.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'singing'; it should be 'has'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and corrected for clarity.

× So I think everyone happiness be good singing happy.

✓ So I think everyone's happiness comes from good singing and happiness.

The phrase 'everyone happiness' should be possessive 'everyone's happiness'. The sentence is unclear and corrected to convey the intended meaning.

× They are good emotion about them all.

✓ They all have good emotions about it.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction provides a clearer and grammatically correct sentence.