Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is quite long and a bit repetitive. Try to be more concise and clear by directly answering the question first, then adding one or two supporting details. Also, avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and unclear expressions such as 'I don't think well'.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially karaoke. I like going to private karaoke rooms with my friends because it’s fun and relaxing, even though I’m not very good at singing.

제안: Your answer provides relevant information but lacks clear structure and has some grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Also, correct verb tenses and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I have taken some singing lessons when I was a child. Before that, I learned to play guitar and piano, but after practicing guitar, I asked my mom to enroll me in singing classes.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid unnecessary repetition and ambiguous phrases.

예시: I would like to sing for someone I like, a person I’ve been spending time with recently. He enjoys singing too, and I would love to sing together with him.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to grammar and word choice errors. Use simpler, clearer sentences and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to organize your thoughts logically.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because doing things you love makes you feel better. If someone enjoys singing, it can increase their happiness, especially when they sing songs they like.

× Actually I did.

✓ Actually, I did.

A comma is needed after 'Actually' to separate the introductory word from the main clause, improving sentence clarity.

× I had a couple of single, single lessons when I was a kid.

✓ I had a couple of singing lessons when I was a kid.

The word 'single' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'singing' to describe the type of lessons. 'Single' is an adjective meaning one, which does not fit the context.

× So for a while I play guitar and piano and I learned a little bit of both, more guitar than piano.

✓ So for a while I played guitar and piano and I learned a little bit of both, more guitar than piano.

The verb 'play' should be in the past tense 'played' to match the past time frame indicated by 'for a while' and 'learned'.

× So she signed me into a couple of those.

✓ So she signed me up for a couple of those.

The correct phrasal verb is 'signed up for' when referring to enrolling in lessons or classes. 'Signed me into' is incorrect in this context.

× So if I would sing to somebody I think it is him.

✓ So if I were to sing to somebody, I think it would be him.

In conditional sentences, 'if I would' is incorrect; the correct form is 'if I were to' or 'if I sang'. Also, 'I think it is him' should be 'I think it would be him' to match the conditional mood.

× He also likes to sing that he has he has sing to me, well not to me but around me a couple songs and he seems really good.

✓ He also likes to sing; he has sung to me, well not directly to me but around me, a couple of songs and he seems really good.

The phrase 'he has he has sing to me' is incorrect. The correct past participle form 'has sung' should be used. Also, 'around me' is acceptable but adding commas improves clarity. 'A couple songs' should be 'a couple of songs'.

× So I would like to just join to join him.

✓ So I would like to just join him.

The verb 'join' does not require the preposition 'to' after it. Saying 'join to join him' is redundant and incorrect.

× I am truly believe that the happiness also comes with the things that you love to do.

✓ I truly believe that happiness also comes with the things that you love to do.

The phrase 'I am truly believe' is incorrect; it should be 'I truly believe'. The verb 'believe' is in present tense and does not need 'am' before it.

× And if somebody likes to sing, I think they an activity that they're gonna make them increase their happiness and I think singing a song that you love makes you more happy.

✓ And if somebody likes to sing, I think it is an activity that will increase their happiness, and I think singing a song that you love makes you happier.

The phrase 'I think they an activity' is missing a verb and subject agreement; 'it is an activity' is correct. 'They're gonna make them increase' is awkward; 'will increase' is clearer. 'More happy' should be 'happier' as the comparative form of 'happy'.