Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中有个别词汇使用不当，如“seeing slow and calm sounds”应为“singing slow and calm songs”，建议注意词汇的准确性和表达的自然流畅。回答内容较丰富，但部分表达略显重复，可以适当简化，使语言更自然。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions. For instance, when I'm happy, I sing upbeat songs to share my joy. Conversely, when I'm feeling down, I prefer singing slow and soothing songs to comfort myself. Overall, singing helps me relax and relieve stress.

제안: 回答中出现了明显的拼写错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，影响表达的准确性。建议加强词汇拼写的准确性，同时可以增加一些具体细节来丰富回答。

예시: No, I haven't received formal singing lessons. I learned to sing by listening to songs on TV and imitating the singers. Singing feels natural to me, and when people compliment my voice, it motivates me to keep practicing and build my confidence.

제안: 回答结构清晰，表达自然，但有小的语法错误，如“want them feel proud”应为“want them to feel proud”。建议注意语法细节，提升表达准确性。

예시: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I like singing alone because it helps me relax and express my feelings freely. Other times, I enjoy singing for my family, especially my parents, because I want them to feel proud and happy when they hear me sing.

제안: 回答中出现拼写错误，如“it saying lifts their mood”应为“singing lifts their mood”，影响表达清晰度。建议注意拼写和用词准确，同时可以增加更多具体例子使内容更丰富。

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing helps people express their emotions, especially when they feel scared or anxious. For example, it can boost confidence and make people feel braver. Many also find that singing lifts their mood and provides comfort, which is very helpful when they feel sad or depressed.

× I prefer seeing slow and calm sounds to comfort myself.

✓ I prefer singing slow and calm songs to comfort myself.

这里的动词prefer后面应该接动名词形式的动词（singing），而且原句中的'sounds'用词不当，应该用'songs'表示歌曲。

× I think seeing comes naturally to me and people often compliment my voice, which encouraged me to keep practicing and give me confidence.

✓ I think singing comes naturally to me and people often compliment my voice, which encourages me to keep practicing and gives me confidence.

动词think后面应该接动名词singing而不是seeing；此外，时态应保持一致，which后面的动词应为现在时encourages和gives。

× I want them feel proud and happy when they listen to my voice.

✓ I want them to feel proud and happy when they listen to my voice.

动词want后面接宾语加不定式结构，缺少to，应该是want them to feel。

× many people find it saying lifts their mood and provides comfort, which is particularly helpful for those who are feeling depressed.

✓ many people find that singing lifts their mood and provides comfort, which is particularly helpful for those who are feeling depressed.

动词find后面接宾语从句，不能直接接动名词it saying，应该用that引导从句，且it应去掉。