Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Make your answer more natural by saying why you like singing with clear reasons and avoid redundant phrases.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax. When I was a child, I used to sing every day because it made me happy.

제안: Improve sentence structure and add linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, use articles correctly and provide a bit more detail.

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child because my mom was a singer, and I always wanted to follow in her footsteps.

제안: Use correct verb forms and improve sentence clarity. Explain why singing for your family makes you happy with more specific details.

예시: I want to sing for my family because it makes me feel happy to share my music with them, and I enjoy seeing their smiles when they listen.

제안: Complete your sentences and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because when they listen to songs, it can lift their mood and create a joyful atmosphere.

× When I was a child, I singing a lot.

✓ When I was a child, I sang a lot.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used here without an auxiliary verb. The sentence requires the past tense form 'sang' to correctly express a past action.

× I was singing a lot, a lot because I enjoyed for my singing.

✓ I was singing a lot because I enjoyed singing.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used after 'enjoyed'. The verb 'enjoy' is directly followed by a gerund without a preposition. Also, 'a lot' is repeated unnecessarily.

× my mom was singer and I always wanted to be a singer too.

✓ my mom was a singer and I always wanted to be a singer too.

The noun 'singer' requires the indefinite article 'a' when used in singular form to indicate profession or role.

× because it feel me happy when I singing for my family and they are listening to me.

✓ because it makes me happy when I sing for my family and they listen to me.

The pronoun 'it' is correct but the verb 'feel' should be 'makes' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'me' is the object, so 'makes me happy' is correct. 'I singing' should be 'I sing' to match present tense. 'They are listening' can be simplified to 'they listen' for habitual action.