Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法错误较多，句子结构不够自然，且表达略显重复。建议注意时态一致性，避免冗余表达，并尝试使用更丰富的词汇来描述感受。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it is a fun activity that helps me relax when I feel tired after a long day.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，时态使用不当，且句子不够连贯。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并准确表达自己的想法。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons. When I was a child, I wanted to learn, but I felt too shy to sing in front of strangers, so I didn't attend any classes.

제안: 表达不够清晰，词汇使用不当（如'external person'），句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇表达自己的想法，并保持句子简洁明了。

예시: Actually, I don't like singing in front of others, even my family, because I am quite shy and prefer to keep my singing private.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，逻辑混乱。建议理清句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并具体说明原因。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When someone sings well, it can make the audience feel joyful and relaxed. Even if the singer is not very skilled, their enthusiasm can still cheer people up.

× Of course I like singing because I think it's an interesting thing and sing a song can help me to relax when I was very tired.

✓ Of course I like singing because I think it's an interesting thing and singing a song can help me to relax when I am very tired.

这里'sing a song'应该用动名词形式'singing'，因为它作为句子的主语补语出现，且时态应与前文保持一致，使用现在时。

× Actually I want to have a singing lesson when I was a child, but I feel ashamed to sing in a strange people so I don't go to the class.

✓ Actually I wanted to have a singing lesson when I was a child, but I felt ashamed to sing in front of strange people so I didn't go to the class.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态，如'want'改为'wanted'，'feel'改为'felt'，'don't go'改为'didn't go'。

× Actually I want to have a singing lesson when I was a child, but I feel ashamed to sing in a strange people so I don't go to the class.

✓ Actually I wanted to have a singing lesson when I was a child, but I felt ashamed to sing in front of strange people so I didn't go to the class.

'sing in a strange people'中的介词使用错误，应为'sing in front of strange people'，表示在陌生人面前唱歌。

× Actually I want to have a singing lesson when I was a child, but I feel ashamed to sing in a strange people so I don't go to the class.

✓ Actually I wanted to have a singing lesson when I was a child, but I felt ashamed to sing in front of strange people so I didn't go to the class.

'a strange people'中'people'是复数名词，前面不应加不定冠词'a'，应直接用'people'。

× I think I really don't want to sing for anyone, include my family, because I think I'm really an external person, so I can't do that.

✓ I think I really don't want to sing for anyone, including my family, because I think I'm really an introverted person, so I can't do that.

'include'用法错误，应该用现在分词形式'including'来引出包含的内容；'external person'应为'introverted person'，表示内向的人。

× I think I really don't want to sing for anyone, include my family, because I think I'm really an external person, so I can't do that.

✓ I think I really don't want to sing for anyone, including my family, because I think I'm really an introverted person, so I can't do that.

'external person'用词不当，应使用'introverted person'表示内向的人。

× Oh of course, if someone seems very good it can make the audience happy and relaxed, but although if someone nothing very good, it can make the audience happy.

✓ Oh of course, if someone sings very well, it can make the audience happy and relaxed, but even if someone doesn't sing very well, it can still make the audience happy.

句子结构混乱，'if someone seems very good'应改为'if someone sings very well'，'but although if someone nothing very good'结构错误，应改为'but even if someone doesn't sing very well'，使句子通顺且符合逻辑。