Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有很多重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. I especially enjoy classic songs.

제안: 回答中有很多重复和断断续续的表达，缺乏连贯性。建议用完整句子描述学习唱歌的经历，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing during my childhood in music classes at school.

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱。建议直接回答想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，使用简单明了的句子。

예시: I want to sing for my mother, father, and wife because they are the most important people in my life.

제안: 回答中有很多重复和语法错误，表达不清楚。建议用简洁的句子说明唱歌如何带来快乐，并举例说明。

예시: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and enjoy themselves.

× Yes, because song can mix can can make me feel funny.

✓ Yes, because songs can mix and can make me feel funny.

这里'song'应该用复数形式'songs'，因为表达的是一般情况或多种歌曲。

× Yes, because song can mix can can make me feel funny.

✓ Yes, because songs can mix and can make me feel happy.

'funny'通常表示滑稽的，表达感受时应使用'happy'表示开心。

× I like the classic classic singing song.

✓ I like classic singing songs.

'song'应为复数形式'songs'，且重复的'classic'应去掉一个。

× I I learned the thing in in the music class. During. During childhood. Childhood.

✓ I learned it in music class during my childhood.

句子中重复词语应删除，'the thing'不明确，改为'it'更合适。

× In fact, I wanted to see a scene from my mother, father and my wife because they are my aim, most important people.

✓ In fact, I want to sing for my mother, father and my wife because they are my most important people.

'wanted to see a scene from'表达不清，应改为'want to sing for'，且'aim'用法错误，应删除。

× See, OK, making makes the people to relax and they're happy, happy as a can it can makes it can makes people.

✓ See, OK, singing makes people relax and be happy.

'makes'后不接'to'，'happy as a can'无意义，应简化为'makes people relax and be happy'。