Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is quite natural and effective, but try to avoid redundancy and keep your sentences concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'singing' multiple times, you can use pronouns or synonyms.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and clear my mind. Moreover, it boosts my energy levels, especially when I listen to devotional and Punjabi songs. For instance, singing along after a long day makes me feel refreshed and more positive.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to correct mistakes like 'for my for myself' and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: No, I've never learned how to sing because I prefer listening to songs rather than singing. Usually, I just sing quietly along with the lyrics while the song is playing, so I don't feel the need to take formal singing lessons.

제안: Your answer is well-structured and clear. To improve, use linking words like 'because' or 'as' to connect your ideas and check for minor grammatical errors such as 'express my feeling' which should be 'express my feelings'.

예시: In the future, if I get a chance to sing any song, I would love to perform it for my parents and my girlfriend because singing for them would show my respect and gratitude for their constant support and love. It would be a special moment to express my feelings and make them feel appreciated.

제안: Your answer is comprehensive and uses good linking words. To enhance it further, try to avoid starting sentences with 'Yes, in my opinion, I believe' as it is redundant. Instead, start directly with your opinion and support it with examples.

예시: I believe singing can bring happiness in many ways. For instance, singing along to our favorite songs or listening to music can uplift our mood and help us feel emotionally better. Moreover, since there are many different music genres, people can choose what suits their taste, making singing a powerful way to relieve stress and connect with others.

× Singing along to these songs after a long day makes me feel refreshed and more positive.

✓ Singing along to these songs after a long day makes me feel refreshed and more positive.

No correction needed here as the use of 'Singing' as a gerund is correct in this context.

× No, I've never learned how to sing because I prefer listening to songs rather than singing them for my for myself.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing because I prefer listening to songs rather than singing them for myself.

The phrase 'for my for myself' is incorrect due to redundancy and misuse of pronouns. The correct phrase is 'for myself' which properly reflects the reflexive pronoun usage.

× Usually I just along or sing quietly with the lyrics while the song is playing so I don't feel the need to take formal singing lessons.

✓ Usually, I just hum along or sing quietly with the lyrics while the song is playing, so I don't feel the need to take formal singing lessons.

The original sentence is missing a verb after 'just' and lacks proper punctuation. Adding 'hum' clarifies the action, and commas improve readability and sentence structure.

× It would be a special moment to express my feeling and make them feel appreciated.

✓ It would be a special moment to express my feelings and make them feel appreciated.

The word 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to correctly refer to the emotions being expressed.