Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态和单词拼写，简洁明了地表达观点。

예시: Yes, I like singing because I learned music when I was a child. Singing helps me relax and feel happy, especially when I am stressed at home.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复和错误，清晰表达是否接受过专业训练。

예시: No, I have never received professional training, but I have attended my school's music classes where the teacher taught me some singing skills.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“my grandma she like”应简化为“my grandma likes”。建议简洁表达原因，避免冗余。

예시: I want to sing for my grandma because she loves music, and I think singing for her will make her very happy.

제안: 回答中多处拼写错误（如“seeing”应为“singing”），表达不清且有语法错误。建议使用正确单词，简洁表达观点，避免模糊和重复。

예시: Yes, I believe singing is one of the best ways to relax and bring happiness to people. It helps them express their feelings and feel joyful.

× Yes, I like singing because when I was a childhood I learned music so seeing is my relaxed way in my leisure time.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I was a child I learned music, so singing is my way to relax in my leisure time.

“when I was a childhood”中“childhood”是名词，不能用作表示人的时候，应该用“child”。另外，“seeing”应为“singing”，且表达“放松的方式”应使用“way to relax”。

× So I think seeing can give me happiness and relax when I feel the stress for my home.

✓ So I think singing can give me happiness and relaxation when I feel stressed at home.

“seeing”应为“singing”，且“relax”作为名词应改为“relaxation”。“feel the stress for my home”表达不自然，应改为“feel stressed at home”。

× Actually not. I not accept the professional training, but I attend the school's music class and teacher will teach me some singing skill.

✓ Actually not. I have not accepted professional training, but I attend the school's music class and the teacher teaches me some singing skills.

“I not accept”语法错误，应为“I have not accepted”表示过去到现在的经历。动词“teach”应与单数主语“teacher”一致，改为“teaches”。“singing skill”应为复数“singing skills”。

× I want to sing for my grandma because my grandma she like music very well so I think when I sing for her and she will feel very happy.

✓ I want to sing for my grandma because she likes music very much, so I think when I sing for her, she will feel very happy.

“my grandma she”重复使用主语，应去掉“my grandma”。“like”应为第三人称单数“likes”。“very well”用于能力描述，表达喜欢应用“very much”。

× Yes, of course. I think seeing is a the best relaxed way for most people and it can bring the people some happiness and some helpless help.

✓ Yes, of course. I think singing is the best way to relax for most people and it can bring people some happiness and some helplessness.

“seeing”应为“singing”。“a the best”冠词重复，应去掉“a”。“relaxed way”应为“way to relax”。“the people”前不需要定冠词。最后“helpless help”表达不清，应为“helplessness”或更合适的词。

× So I think seeing is a good way to express happiness for people.

✓ So I think singing is a good way to express happiness for people.

“seeing”应为“singing”。