Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your feelings about singing more naturally and clearly, for example, by saying why singing makes you feel comfortable or happy. Keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my feelings and makes me feel relaxed and happy.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to answer directly and add a little detail using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing formally, but I enjoy singing by myself at home.

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to clearly state who you want to sing for and why, using simple and correct sentences.

예시: I want to sing for my family because they always support me and it makes them happy.

제안: Your answer is confusing and does not directly answer the question. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples, using simple and correct language.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and enjoy themselves.

× Yes, I like singing because it's true of my mind and its opinion my mind, and it feels me comfortable.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it is true to my mind and my opinion, and it makes me feel comfortable.

The original sentence misuses pronouns such as 'its' and 'me' and has unclear phrasing. 'Its opinion my mind' is incorrect; it should be 'my opinion'. Also, 'it feels me comfortable' should be 'it makes me feel comfortable' to correctly express the feeling caused by singing.

× No, I I never ever learned how to sing and just stay there by myself.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing and just stay there by myself.

The sentence uses simple past tense 'learned' incorrectly with 'never ever' which suggests a present perfect tense is more appropriate to indicate experience up to now. Also, the repetition of 'I' is a mistake. 'Have never learned' is the correct form to express that the action has not happened at any time before now.

× My lovely sing for me just like he. I'm too much.

✓ My loved one sings for me just like he does. I like it very much.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'My lovely' is not a proper noun phrase; 'My loved one' or 'My beloved' is better. 'Sing' should be 'sings' to agree with the singular subject. 'Just like he' is incomplete; it should be 'just like he does'. 'I'm too much' is unclear; likely intended to express strong liking, so 'I like it very much' is appropriate.

× Not sure but for some people CK is annoying for dance and they don't work to listen the music because they disappointed for dance.

✓ I'm not sure, but for some people, CK is annoying when dancing and they don't want to listen to the music because they are disappointed with the dance.

The sentence has several pronoun and preposition errors. 'Not sure' lacks a subject; 'I'm not sure' is correct. 'Annoying for dance' should be 'annoying when dancing'. 'They don't work to listen the music' is incorrect; it should be 'they don't want to listen to the music'. 'They disappointed for dance' should be 'they are disappointed with the dance' to correctly express the feeling and preposition usage.