Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve pronunciation and vocabulary accuracy, especially the word "singing" instead of "seeing". Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to make the answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I do like singing, although I usually prefer not to sing in front of others because I feel quite shy. However, singing alone helps me to relieve stress and pass the time, especially when I'm feeling anxious, as it allows me to relax and express my emotions.

제안: Focus on completing your sentences clearly and avoid hesitation sounds like "umm" and repeated words. Use correct vocabulary such as "singing" instead of "seeing" and provide more specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

예시: No, I've never learned how to sing because my parents didn't notice any singing talent in me, so they didn't send me to any classes when I was a child. Besides, I have never been very interested in singing myself.

제안: Complete your sentences fully and avoid trailing off. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about why you prefer singing alone.

예시: I would say nobody except myself because I feel quite shy singing in front of others. However, sometimes I sing to myself when I'm alone to relieve stress and feel more relaxed.

제안: Avoid incomplete sentences and incorrect words like "sun" instead of "song". Use linking words properly and provide a complete contrasting idea to make your answer clearer and more coherent.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people, but it largely depends on the type of song. For example, songs with upbeat melodies and positive lyrics can boost our mood and make us feel joyful. However, if the song is melancholy, it might evoke sadness instead.

× Yes, I do like seeing, although I usually prefer not to sing in front of others because I feel quite shy.

✓ Yes, I do like singing, although I usually prefer not to sing in front of others because I feel quite shy.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect here because the verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form of the verb 'sing', which is 'singing'. 'Seeing' is a different verb and does not fit the context. The correction is to use 'singing' to correctly express the activity enjoyed.

× I find that seeing along helps me to relieve stress and pass the time, especially when I'm feeling anxious.

✓ I find that singing alone helps me to relieve stress and pass the time, especially when I'm feeling anxious.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'singing'. Also, 'along' is a typo for 'alone'. The verb 'singing' is the correct gerund form to describe the activity that helps relieve stress.

× No, I've never learned how to sing. Umm, I I think my parents didn't find any talent about singing in myself, so they didn't send me to any classes when I was a kid.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing. Umm, I think my parents didn't find any talent for singing in me, so they didn't send me to any classes when I was a kid.

The phrase 'talent about singing in myself' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'for' and the pronoun should be 'me' instead of 'myself'. Also, 'myself' is a reflexive pronoun and is not appropriate here. The sentence is corrected to use 'talent for singing in me'.

× And actually I don't have any interest in seeing myself, so I've.

✓ And actually I don't have any interest in singing myself, so I haven't.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing' to match the context. Also, the sentence is incomplete; 'so I've' should be 'so I haven't' to complete the thought. The correction reflects the intended meaning.

× I'm feeling quite shy to sing in front of others so I don't want to sing for others.

✓ I feel quite shy singing in front of others, so I don't want to sing for others.

The phrase 'I'm feeling quite shy to sing' is awkward. The verb 'feel' is generally used in the simple present to express states. Also, 'to sing' after 'shy' is incorrect; the gerund 'singing' is appropriate here. The correction improves naturalness and grammatical accuracy.

× However, sometimes I think to myself when I'm alone to relieve stress and.

✓ However, sometimes I sing to myself when I'm alone to relieve stress.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. The phrase 'think to myself' does not fit the context of relieving stress through singing. The correction adds 'sing' as the main verb to complete the sentence and convey the intended meaning.

× But however, if the sun is melancholy.

✓ However, if the song is melancholy.

The phrase 'But however' is redundant; only one conjunction is needed. Also, 'sun' is a typo for 'song'. The sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity, but the correction focuses on removing redundancy and fixing the typo.