Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你嘅答案表達咗你對唱歌嘅喜愛同埋原因，但語言有啲唔自然同埋有錯字，例如「through saying」應該係「through singing」。建議你用更自然嘅句式，例如用連接詞連接兩個原因，令答案更流暢同清晰。

예시: Yes, I really love singing because it helps me reduce stress and allows me to express my emotions effectively.

제안: 你嘅回答語法錯誤較多，例如「I not really learn」應該係「I haven't really learnt」。句子結構唔完整，令意思唔清楚。建議你用正確嘅時態同埋完整句子，並用連接詞令答案更連貫。

예시: I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but sometimes I watch YouTube videos to learn how to sing better and improve my skills.

제안: 你嘅答案有語法同用詞錯誤，例如「thank for some people」應該係「sing for some people」。句子結構唔清晰，建議你用更簡潔同正確嘅句子，並用連接詞令答案更流暢。

예시: I want to sing for people who are feeling down because I hope to bring them positive feelings and help them relax.

제안: 你嘅答案有重複同冗長嘅部分，例如「people to people」同「people who are listening to the people who are singing」。建議你用更簡潔嘅句子，並用連接詞令答案更有條理。

예시: Of course, singing connects people and helps listeners feel the emotions in the song, which can relieve stress and bring happiness.

× Yes, I really love it because singing is the way I can reduce my stress and I can express my emotions through saying.

✓ Yes, I really love it because singing is the way I can reduce my stress and I can express my emotions through singing.

'Saying' is incorrect here because the intended meaning is to express emotions through the act of singing, which requires the gerund form 'singing'. 'Saying' means to speak words, which does not fit the context. 喺呢句入面，應該用 'singing'（動名詞）而唔係 'saying'，因為講緊係透過唱歌去表達情感，而 'saying' 係講話，唔啱用喺呢度。

× I not really learn anything with our professional teacher, but sometimes I will look on YouTube how to sing better and how to improve my singing skills and it is.

✓ I have not really learned anything from a professional teacher, but sometimes I look on YouTube to learn how to sing better and how to improve my singing skills.

The sentence uses incorrect tense and structure. 'I not really learn' should be 'I have not really learned' to indicate past experience. 'Look on YouTube how to sing' should be 'look on YouTube to learn how to sing' for clarity and correctness. 呢句用咗錯嘅時態同結構，應該用完成時 'have not really learned' 表示過去經驗，另外 'look on YouTube how to sing' 應該改為 'look on YouTube to learn how to sing'，令句子更通順同正確。

× I not really learn anything with our professional teacher, but sometimes I will look on YouTube how to sing better and how to improve my singing skills and it is.

✓ I have not really learned anything from a professional teacher, but sometimes I look on YouTube to learn how to sing better and how to improve my singing skills.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'from' when referring to learning from someone. Also, 'look on YouTube' is acceptable but 'look at YouTube' or 'watch on YouTube' is more natural. 呢度用 'with' 係唔啱嘅，應該用 'from' 去表示向某人學習。另外 'look on YouTube' 雖然可以，但用 'watch on YouTube' 或 'look at YouTube' 會更自然。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing to?

The correct preposition after 'sing' when indicating the audience is 'to', not 'for'. 'Sing to someone' means performing for them. 喺 'sing' 呢個動詞後面，表示對象嘅介詞應該係 'to'，唔係 'for'，所以應該講 'sing to someone'。

× I want to thank for some people who have their bad emotion because I want to bring some positive images to them and let them feel more relaxing and let them feel better.

✓ I want to sing to some people who have negative emotions because I want to bring some positive images to them and help them feel more relaxed and better.

'Thank for some people' is incorrect; likely the student meant 'sing to some people'. Also, 'have their bad emotion' is unnatural; 'have negative emotions' is better. 'Feel more relaxing' should be 'feel more relaxed'. 呢句入面 'thank for some people' 唔啱，應該係 'sing to some people'。另外 'have their bad emotion' 用法唔自然，改為 'have negative emotions'。'Feel more relaxing' 應該係 'feel more relaxed'。

× I want to thank for some people who have their bad emotion because I want to bring some positive images to them and let them feel more relaxing and let them feel better.

✓ I want to sing to some people who have negative emotions because I want to bring some positive images to them and help them feel more relaxed and better.

The pronoun 'their' is used correctly, but the phrase 'their bad emotion' is unnatural. It is better to say 'negative emotions'. Also, 'let them feel more relaxing' is incorrect; 'help them feel more relaxed' is better. 雖然 'their' 用得啱，但 'their bad emotion' 呢個短語唔自然，應該用 'negative emotions'。另外 'let them feel more relaxing' 應該改為 'help them feel more relaxed'。

× Of course, singing is really a way to connect people to people and people who are listening to the people who are singing and they were feeling the song to bring the emotion and to release their stress and yeah.

✓ Of course, singing is really a way to connect people with each other. People who listen to those who are singing feel the song's emotions, which helps them release their stress.

The original sentence is long and confusing with repeated 'people' and awkward phrasing. It needs to be broken into clearer parts with correct subject-verb agreement and prepositions. 原句太長而且結構混亂，重複使用 'people'，語序唔正確。應該拆開句子，用正確嘅主謂一致同介詞，使句子更清晰。