Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. For example, instead of 'I always since of melody songs,' say 'I have always enjoyed listening to melodic and Carnatic songs since I was a child.'

예시: Yes, I like singing very much. Since I was a child, I have enjoyed listening to melodic and Carnatic songs. Moreover, I chose music as a subject in school to improve both my English and musical knowledge.

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Begin with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. I attended many music classes and practiced vocals regularly under the guidance of my teachers, who taught me valuable knowledge and skills.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by adding linking words and more specific details to make it more natural and effective.

예시: I want to sing for my mom because she means everything to me. Therefore, I would like to dedicate a special song to her as a token of my love and appreciation.

제안: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and making your ideas clearer. Use linking words to connect your points logically and provide specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when we work while listening to music or singing, it helps us feel relaxed and perform better compared to working in silence.

× Yes, I do like singing, uh, since when I was a child I always since of melody songs and Carnatic songs and uh, also in my school level, I choose music subject to enhance my English, enhance my music knowledge. So I always like.

✓ Yes, I have liked singing since I was a child. I have always liked melody songs and Carnatic songs. Also, at school level, I chose music as a subject to enhance my English and music knowledge. So, I have always liked it.

The phrase 'since when I was a child' is incorrect; 'since I was a child' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate time from past to present. Also, 'since of melody songs' is incorrect; it should be 'liked melody songs'. The preposition 'in my school level' should be 'at school level'. The verb tense should be consistent with the time frame, so present perfect 'have liked' is appropriate here.

× When some many musical classes and do music practices, vocal practices with the guidance of the teachers and they taught me a very good knowledge and skills of music.

✓ I attended many musical classes and did music and vocal practices with the guidance of the teachers, and they taught me very good knowledge and skills in music.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and verb structure. 'When some many musical classes and do music practices' is incorrect. The past tense verbs 'attended' and 'did' are needed to describe completed actions. Also, 'a very good knowledge' should be 'very good knowledge' (knowledge is uncountable). The preposition 'of music' should be 'in music'.

× I just want to sing for my mom. She's my everything and I, I have to dedicate a song for her.

✓ I just want to sing for my mom. She's my everything, and I want to dedicate a song to her.

The phrase 'dedicate a song for her' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' when dedicating something to someone. Also, the repetition 'I, I' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.

× Yes, of course thinking can bring happiness to people because uh, if you, if you are working without singing or without any music, you won't be able to work correctly or in a good manner. But with sing, but with singing it's really easy.

✓ Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people because if you are working without singing or any music, you won't be able to work correctly or in a good manner. But with singing, it's really easy.

The word 'thinking' is incorrect here; it should be 'singing' to match the context. Also, 'with sing' is incorrect; it should be 'with singing'. The sentence structure is improved by removing unnecessary pauses and repetitions.