Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态，并简洁表达原因，同时避免重复。

예시: Yes, I like singing because my mother often took me to music centers when I was a child, which gave me wonderful experiences. Also, practicing piano has helped me develop a strong musical foundation.

제안: 句子结构不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意主谓一致。

예시: No, I haven't learned to sing formally, but I have studied piano extensively. This musical background helps me appreciate singing even more.

제안: 表达重复且用词不准确，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用恰当的词汇表达情感。

예시: I want to sing for my friends because we often go to karaoke together and have a great time singing and enjoying ourselves.

제안: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，使用简单句表达观点，并举例说明。

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions. For example, singing joyful songs can lift our mood, while sad songs help us release feelings.

× I think I like singing because when I'm a kid my mom always took me to the music center to have a wonderful experience.

✓ I think I like singing because when I was a kid my mom always took me to the music center to have a wonderful experience.

这里的时间是过去，所以应该用过去时态。'I'm a kid' 应该改为 'I was a kid'。

× And also I practice piano a lot, so I'm very educated in the music.

✓ And also I practice piano a lot, so I'm very educated in music.

'music' 前不需要加定冠词 'the'，因为这里指的是音乐这一类事物。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I learned how to play the piano a lot and this experience make me have a strong musical background that helps me enjoy singing even more.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I have learned how to play the piano a lot and this experience makes me have a strong musical background that helps me enjoy singing even more.

'learned' 应该用现在完成时 'have learned' 来表示过去到现在的经历；'make' 主语是单数 'this experience'，动词应为第三人称单数 'makes'。

× I think I want to sing for my friends because we always went to the karaoke to have a very excited part, exciting party and always sing a lot.

✓ I think I want to sing for my friends because we always go to karaoke to have a very exciting party and always sing a lot.

'went' 是过去时，但句子表达的是习惯动作，应使用一般现在时 'go'；'excited part' 应为 'exciting party'，形容词用法错误。

× I think I want to sing for my friends because we always went to the karaoke to have a very excited part, exciting party and always sing a lot.

✓ I think I want to sing for my friends because we always go to karaoke to have a very exciting party and always sing a lot.

'excited' 是形容词，表示感到兴奋的人或物，'exciting' 表示令人兴奋的，修饰 'party' 应用 'exciting'。

× Yes I think it can helps people a lot because seeing can be a way more a form to people how to express our emotion, like we can sing unhappy things when we feel delighted and also a very sadly love songs can make.

✓ Yes, I think it can help people a lot because singing can be a way or a form for people to express our emotions, like we can sing unhappy things when we feel delighted and also very sad love songs can make us feel something.

'can' 后动词应为原形，'helps' 应改为 'help'；'seeing' 应为 'singing'；'a way more a form' 结构混乱，应改为 'a way or a form'；'sadly' 是副词，修饰形容词应使用 'sad'；句子结构不完整，需补充。