Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误，如“fond of seeing”应为“fond of singing”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because I like listening to various songs and often try to sing along after hearing them.

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，“can learn”应改为过去时态“could learn”。建议注意时态一致性，并补充更多细节使回答更丰富。

예시: Yes, when I was five, my mother enrolled me in a music class where I learned how to sing properly with the help of my teacher.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，且表达略显重复。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意拼写准确。

예시: I don't want to sing for anyone because I am a very shy person, and I feel nervous singing in front of others. Therefore, I prefer to sing just for myself.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误和表达不清，如“thing”应为“singing”，“seeing”应为“singing”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring a lot of joy to people because it helps us relax and find happiness through expressing ourselves.

× Oh yes, I really fond of seeing because I like to listen to a variety of songs and I will try to sing them after I listen to it.

✓ Oh yes, I really am fond of singing because I like to listen to a variety of songs and I will try to sing them after I listen to them.

这里的动词短语应使用动名词形式，'fond of'后面应接动名词'singing'，而不是'seeing'。另外，'listen to it'中的'it'应指代复数'songs'，应改为'them'。

× Yes, when I was 5 my mother sent me to a music class where I can learn how to sing well with my music teacher.

✓ Yes, when I was 5 my mother sent me to a music class where I could learn how to sing well with my music teacher.

句中描述过去的情况，'can'应使用过去式'could'，表示过去能力。

× I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm really shy person. I am afraid of seeing in front of a lot of people or just a few people. I think I'd like to sing for myself.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm really a shy person. I am afraid of singing in front of a lot of people or just a few people. I think I'd like to sing for myself.

'shy person'前缺少冠词'a'，'seeing'应为动名词'singing'，表示害怕唱歌。

× Oh yes, I think thing can bring a lot of joy to us. I think it's a very good way for us to relax and we can find our own happiness when we are seeing.

✓ Oh yes, I think singing can bring a lot of joy to us. I think it's a very good way for us to relax and we can find our own happiness when we are singing.

'thing'应为'singing'，表示唱歌；'seeing'应为'singing'，保持语义一致。