Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且表达了原因，但句子结构稍显重复，且最后一句不完整。建议避免句子冗余，确保句子完整且逻辑连贯。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a busy day. For instance, singing my favorite songs lifts my mood and reduces stress.

제안: 回答直接但缺乏细节支持，表达略显简单。建议增加具体原因或感受，使回答更丰富且有逻辑连接。

예시: Actually, I haven't taken formal singing lessons because I enjoy singing casually. I feel that learning professionally might take the fun out of it for me.

제안: 回答较好，表达清晰且有具体例子支持。建议在连接词使用上更自然，避免重复“actually”，使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer singing with friends rather than alone because it creates a lively atmosphere. For example, we encourage each other and have more fun when singing together.

제안: 回答内容重复且表达不够具体。建议使用更多具体细节和连接词，避免重复表达，使回答更丰富有说服力。

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express emotions and connect with others. Moreover, singing together can strengthen friendships and create joyful memories.

× Singing is a great way for me.

✓ Singing is a great way for me to relax.

句子结构不完整，缺少动词不定式短语来说明“a great way”的具体用途。应补充“to relax”使句子完整。

× Actually, I haven't learned how to sing because singing is just a hobby for me.

✓ Actually, I haven't learnt how to sing because singing is just a hobby for me.

根据上下文，使用“learnt”更符合英式英语习惯，且与“have not”连用时，过去分词形式应正确。

× Actually, I prefer singing with friends rather than singing alone because it creates a more enjoyable and lively atmosphere.

✓ Actually, I prefer to sing with friends rather than sing alone because it creates a more enjoyable and lively atmosphere.

动词prefer后面应接不定式或动名词，但保持一致性更好，且“prefer to do”结构更常见。

× Yes, I do, because I think singing is an enjoyable and comfortable thing to me.

✓ Yes, I do, because I think singing is an enjoyable and comfortable thing for me.

介词“to”用法错误，表达“对我来说”应使用“for”。

× At the same time, I think singing can bring friendship to people.

✓ At the same time, I think singing can bring friendship among people.

“bring friendship to people”表达不自然，通常用“bring friendship among people”表示“在人们之间带来友谊”。