Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid unnecessary words. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by saying, for example, "I enjoy singing when I'm alone because I don't think I sing well in public."

예시: I enjoy singing when I'm alone because I don't feel confident singing in front of others.

제안: There are several mistakes with word choice and grammar here, such as confusing 'sing' with 'sign'. Make sure to use the correct vocabulary and verb tenses. A clearer answer would be: "No, I have never learned how to sing because I'm not interested. Maybe in the future, I will learn, but not now."

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I am not very interested, but I might consider it in the future.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains several errors. Focus on answering directly and clearly. For example, "I like to sing for myself because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Sometimes, I also enjoy singing for my friends."

예시: I usually sing for myself as it helps me relax and express how I feel, but sometimes I sing for my friends too.

제안: Your answer is contradictory and confusing. Try to express your opinion clearly and use correct grammar. For example, "I think singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions freely."

예시: I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their feelings and feel joyful.

× I like singing when I'm alone and but I don't signing when people are around me or in public place because I think I don't have a good sound for singing.

✓ I like singing when I'm alone but I don't sing when people are around me or in public places because I think I don't have a good voice for singing.

The verb 'signing' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'sing'. Also, 'don't' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'don't sing' is correct. Additionally, 'public place' should be plural as 'public places' to refer generally to such locations. 'Sound' is better replaced with 'voice' in this context.

× No, I've never learned how to sign because I'm not interested in signing.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing because I'm not interested in singing.

The word 'sign' is incorrect; the intended word is 'sing'. The verb 'learned' is correctly in the past participle form for present perfect tense. The gerund 'signing' should be 'singing' to match the context.

× Maybe later in future I'm learning signing but now it's not my favorite.

✓ Maybe later in the future I'll learn singing but now it's not my favourite.

The phrase 'I'm learning' is present continuous and does not fit with 'maybe later in the future'. The correct future tense 'I'll learn' (I will learn) should be used. Also, 'signing' should be 'singing'. 'Favourite' is the British English spelling.

× I want to think for myself because it makes me feel relaxed and express my emotions.

✓ I want to sing for myself because it makes me feel relaxed and helps me express my emotions.

The phrase 'want to think for myself' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'sing'. Also, to maintain parallel structure, 'helps me express' is clearer than just 'express'.

× And the other hand, it's very enjoyable for myself and I think I shared to think for other people.

✓ On the other hand, it's very enjoyable for me and I think I should share it with other people.

The phrase 'And the other hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'On the other hand'. 'Myself' should be 'me' here. 'I shared to think' is incorrect; it should be 'I should share it'. Also, 'to think for other people' is unclear; 'share it with other people' is appropriate.

× In my opinion, it can't bring happiness to people. It can help people to express their emotion freely and make them happy.

✓ In my opinion, it can't bring happiness to people. It can help people express their emotions freely and make them happy.

The phrase 'help people to express' is acceptable but 'help people express' is more natural. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to agree with 'people'.

× But happiness, it's a different than signing.

✓ But happiness is different from singing.

The phrase 'a different than' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'different from'. Also, 'signing' should be 'singing'. The sentence is better without the comma and 'it's' for clarity.