Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
To be honest, I like singing when I'm alone and but I don't signing when people are around me or in public place because I think I don't have a good sound for singing.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
No, I've never learned how to sign because I'm not interested in signing. Maybe later in future I'm learning signing but now it's not my favorite.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
I want to think for myself because it makes me feel relaxed and express my emotions. And the other hand, it's very enjoyable for myself and I think I shared to think for other people.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
In my opinion, it can't bring happiness to people. It can help people to express their emotion freely and make them happy. But happiness, it's a different than signing.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid unnecessary words. Also, make your sentences more concise and natural by saying, for example, "I enjoy singing when I'm alone because I don't think I have a good voice to sing in public."
예시: I enjoy singing when I'm alone because I don't think I have a good voice to sing in public.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 55.0제안: There are several mistakes with word choice and grammar here. You confused 'sing' with 'sign'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward. Try to answer directly and clearly, for example: "No, I have never learned how to sing because I am not interested. Maybe I will learn in the future, but not now."
예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am not interested. Maybe I will learn in the future, but not now.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 50.0제안: Your answer is unclear and contains several errors. You seem to confuse 'sing' with 'think'. Also, the ideas are not well connected. Try to answer directly with clear sentences and linking words, for example: "I like to sing for myself because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I also enjoy sharing my singing with others."
예시: I like to sing for myself because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I also enjoy sharing my singing with others.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 55.0제안: Your answer is contradictory and contains errors. You say singing can't bring happiness but then say it makes people happy. Also, 'signing' is used incorrectly. Try to clarify your opinion and use correct vocabulary, for example: "In my opinion, singing helps people express their emotions and can make them feel happy, but happiness depends on many other factors."
예시: In my opinion, singing helps people express their emotions and can make them feel happy, but happiness depends on many other factors.
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