Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题，比如将'singing'误说成'saying'，且句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和冗长。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I find it boring. I prefer spending time with my friends instead.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用简单句子清晰表达过去经历，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, my mother tried to teach me singing when I was a child, but I wasn't interested, so I forgot most of it.

제안: 回答不清晰，词汇使用错误（如'intervalled'），且表达含糊。建议直接回答问题，并用简单明了的语言说明原因。

예시: I don't really want to sing for anyone because I feel shy and uncomfortable performing in front of people.

제안: 句子结构不完整，表达不流畅。建议用完整句子表达观点，并给出简短理由。

예시: Yes, singing can make some people happy, but it doesn't have the same effect on me.

× I would like to say I'm not a big fan of saying as I think it's quite boring and I think I have better choice such as hanging out with friends.

✓ I would like to say I'm not a big fan of singing as I think it's quite boring and I think I have better choices such as hanging out with friends.

这里'saying'用错了，应该用动名词'singing'表示喜欢或不喜欢做某事。'choice'应为复数形式，因为后面举了多个例子。

× I would like to say I'm not a big fan of saying as I think it's quite boring and I think I have better choice such as hanging out with friends.

✓ I would like to say I'm not a big fan of singing as I think it's quite boring and I think I have better choices such as hanging out with friends.

'choice'应使用复数形式'choices'，因为后面列举了多个选择。

× I would like to say when I was a child my mother try hard to teach me something related to singing but as I have talked before I'm I'm not interested in singing so I forget all the things.

✓ I would like to say when I was a child my mother tried hard to teach me something related to singing but as I have said before I'm not interested in singing so I forgot all the things.

动词'try'应使用过去式'tried'，因为描述过去的动作。'forget'也应使用过去式'forgot'。'have talked'应改为' have said'更符合表达习惯。

× I would like to say when I was a child my mother try hard to teach me something related to singing but as I have talked before I'm I'm not interested in singing so I forget all the things.

✓ I would like to say when I was a child my mother tried hard to teach me something related to singing but as I have said before I'm not interested in singing so I forgot everything.

'all the things'表达不自然，改为'everything'更符合英语习惯。

× OK, I think this is a tough question because I'm, I'm also a little bit intervalled and I don't want to touch people, to have a, to touch with people.

✓ OK, I think this is a tough question because I'm also a little bit introverted and I don't want to touch people or have contact with people.

'intervalled'是错误单词，正确应为'introverted'表示内向。'to touch with people'表达错误，改为'have contact with people'更准确。

× OK, I think this is a tough question because I'm, I'm also a little bit intervalled and I don't want to touch people, to have a, to touch with people.

✓ OK, I think this is a tough question because I'm also a little bit introverted and I don't want to touch people or have contact with people.

'to touch with people'中介词'with'使用错误，应去掉或改为'have contact with people'。

× I would like to say for some people this could be a efficient ways, but for me I think it's not worked I.

✓ I would like to say for some people this could be an efficient way, but for me I think it doesn't work.

'a efficient ways'中'a'和'ways'数量不一致，应改为'an efficient way'。'not worked I'语序和时态错误，应改为'it doesn't work'。