Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“seeing”应为“singing”。建议加强基本语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复表达，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and improves my mood. For example, when I feel stressed, singing alone at home makes me feel happier and calmer. However, I usually feel shy singing in front of others, so I prefer to sing alone where I feel more comfortable.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，词汇使用不准确，如“learning about seeing very professional living”表达不清。建议练习正确的时态和词汇搭配，简洁明了地表达观点。

예시: No, I haven't learned to sing professionally because I don't want to be a professional singer. I usually sing just for fun and enjoy it by myself. However, if I have more opportunities to perform in front of others, I might consider taking lessons to improve my singing skills.

제안: 回答中多处语法和表达错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，句子结构混乱。建议加强句子连贯性和语法准确性，避免重复和不必要的词汇。

예시: I prefer to sing by myself rather than for other people because I feel more comfortable and less pressured when I am alone. Sometimes, I worry that others might laugh at me, so singing alone allows me to enjoy the moment freely and relax.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“seeing”应为“singing”，“created”应为“create”。建议注意动词时态和词汇的正确使用，丰富细节使表达更具体。

예시: Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it helps relieve negative emotions and reduce stress. For example, when people sing their favorite songs, they often feel happier. Moreover, singing together with others can create a sense of connection and help people feel more united.

× Yes, I like because it's helping relax and improve my mood.

✓ Yes, I like it because it helps me relax and improve my mood.

动词help后面应接动词原形或不带ing形式，这里应使用helps而非helping，同时like后面需要宾语it。

× For example, when I feel stressed, seeing by myself at home makes me happier and calmer.

✓ For example, when I feel stressed, singing by myself at home makes me happier and calmer.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，且'by myself'用法不当，改为'singing by myself'更合适。

× However, I usually feel shy seeing in front of others, so I prefer to sing alone where I can be more comfortable.

✓ However, I usually feel shy singing in front of others, so I prefer to sing alone where I can be more comfortable.

动词feel后接形容词shy，后面应接动名词singing而非seeing。

× Sorry I haven't learning about seeing very professional living because I don't want to be a professional singer.

✓ Sorry, I haven't learned about singing very professionally because I don't want to be a professional singer.

这里应使用过去分词learned，且'seeing'应为'singing'，'living'应为'adverb professionally'修饰动词。

× I usually sing just for fun and enjoy it by myself.

✓ I usually sing just for fun and enjoy it by myself.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× However, if I have more opportunities to performed in front of others, I might consider taking lessons to improve my singing skills.

✓ However, if I have more opportunities to perform in front of others, I might consider taking lessons to improve my singing skills.

情态动词后应接动词原形，performed应改为perform。

× Sorry, I prefer to sing by myself rather than for other people because I feel more comfortable and feel no pressure while I was sitting alone.

✓ Sorry, I prefer to sing by myself rather than for other people because I feel more comfortable and feel no pressure while I am sitting alone.

时态应保持一致，描述现在状态应使用现在时am sitting而非过去时was sitting。

× Sometimes I worry about that others may laugh at me, so think about myself allows me to enjoy the moment without any pressure.

✓ Sometimes I worry that others may laugh at me, so thinking about myself allows me to enjoy the moment without any pressure.

worry about后不接that，改为worry that；think应改为动名词thinking作主语。

× For me, seeing is a great way to relax and let me feel free.

✓ For me, singing is a great way to relax and let me feel free.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表达唱歌的意思。

× Are saying seeing can definitely bring happiness to people because it helps relieve negative emotions and reduce stress.

✓ I am saying singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it helps relieve negative emotions and reduce stress.

句子缺少主语，'Are saying'应改为'I am saying'，'seeing'应为'singing'。

× For example, when people seeing their favorite songs, they may often feel more.

✓ For example, when people sing their favorite songs, they may often feel better.

'seeing'应为动词原形'sing'，且句尾不完整，'feel more'应改为'feel better'。

× Moreover, singing together with others can created a sense of connection and help people.

✓ Moreover, singing together with others can create a sense of connection and help people.

情态动词can后应接动词原形，created应改为create。