Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. For example, instead of "it's a feel better and less attractive," say "it makes me feel better and more relaxed." Also, avoid grammatical errors like "When I singing"; use "When I sing." Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel better and more relaxed. When I sing, I feel calm and happy.

제안: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. For example, say "I learned to sing when I was in school. I attended singing classes and learned about music. I felt very happy to join." Also, avoid repetition and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I learned to sing when I was in school. I attended singing classes where I learned about music. I felt very happy to join those classes.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using linking words and correct grammar. For example, "I like to sing with my friends because they enjoy it and always support me. Their encouragement makes me feel really good when I sing." Avoid unclear phrases like "their chair of me."

예시: I like to sing with my friends because they enjoy it and always support me. Their encouragement makes me feel really good when I sing.

제안: Use clearer and more natural expressions. For example, "Yes, I think singing brings happiness to people because it helps them feel better and less stressed. Singing allows people to enjoy themselves and relax." Also, avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your answer is complete and coherent.

예시: Yes, I think singing brings happiness to people because it helps them feel better and less stressed. Singing allows people to enjoy themselves and relax.

× Yes, I like singing because it's a feel better and less attractive.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel better and less stressed.

The phrase 'it's a feel better and less attractive' is incorrect. 'Feel' is a verb, so it should not be used as a noun here. Also, 'less attractive' does not fit the intended meaning. The correct expression is 'makes me feel better and less stressed' to convey the positive effect of singing.

× When I singing I feel very calm and happy.

✓ When I am singing, I feel very calm and happy.

The verb 'singing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Without 'am', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Adding 'am' correctly forms 'I am singing'.

× Yes, I learned when I in a school, I have a singing classes which one I attend attend and I learn music.

✓ Yes, I learned when I was in school. I had singing classes which I attended and learned music.

The sentence has multiple tense and structure errors. 'I in a school' should be 'I was in school' to indicate past tense. 'I have a singing classes' should be 'I had singing classes' to match past tense and correct article usage. 'Which one I attend attend' is incorrect and should be 'which I attended'. 'I learn music' should be 'I learned music' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I feel really very happy to join.

✓ I felt really happy to join.

The phrase 'really very happy' is redundant; 'really happy' suffices. Also, since the action happened in the past, 'feel' should be in past tense 'felt'. The corrected sentence is 'I felt really happy to join'.

× I like to sing with my friends when I sing a song my friends really enjoying and they are supporting me and their chair of me always and I feel really good when I sing a.

✓ I like to sing with my friends. When I sing a song, my friends really enjoy it and they always support me and cheer for me. I feel really good when I sing.

The sentence has several pronoun and verb form errors. 'My friends really enjoying' should be 'my friends really enjoy'. 'Their chair of me always' is incorrect; it should be 'they always support me and cheer for me'. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× Yes, I think singing is happiness, Happiness the people, because when the people singing, they feel better and less stressed.

✓ Yes, I think singing brings happiness to people because when people sing, they feel better and less stressed.

The phrase 'singing is happiness, Happiness the people' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'singing brings happiness to people'. Also, 'when the people singing' should be 'when people sing' to use the correct verb form.

× They are feeling really good to enjoy and.

✓ They feel really good and enjoy themselves.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'They are feeling really good to enjoy and.' lacks an object and proper structure. The corrected sentence 'They feel really good and enjoy themselves.' is complete and clear.