Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，比如“music can let me release, dress”不符合英语表达习惯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I sing, I feel a sense of freedom and happiness.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“Usually I sing with you to play”不明确且不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I haven't taken formal singing lessons. Usually, I sing along with songs on YouTube for fun.

제안: 表达中“throw the song”不符合英语习惯，应使用更准确的动词。建议使用更具体的词汇和句子结构来表达情感。

예시: I want to sing for my friend because songs can convey love, and I want to express my feelings through singing.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“friend saying”应为“singing”。建议注意发音和用词准确性，避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, I absolutely believe that singing can bring happiness because it allows people to enjoy the music without judgment and feel the rhythm.

× I like singing because music can let me release, dress and make me feel relax and during singing I feel freedom and.

✓ I like singing because music can let me release stress, relax, and during singing I feel freedom.

句中'release'后缺少宾语，应该是'release stress'；'dress'用法错误，可能想表达'relax'；'make me feel relax'中'relax'应为形容词'relaxed'，但更自然表达是'relax'作为动词；句尾'and'多余，应去掉。整体应使用动词的-ing形式或正确的动词形式。

× I haven't learned how to sing.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing.

此句无语法错误，符合现在完成时态，表示至今未学会唱歌。

× Usually I sing with you to play.

✓ Usually I sing along when you play.

原句结构混乱，'sing with you to play'表达不清，应改为'sing along when you play'表示通常跟着你唱歌。

× I open the YouTube and follow the music and sing together and.

✓ I open YouTube, follow the music, and sing together.

句尾多余'and'，且'open the YouTube'应为'open YouTube'，句子应简洁连贯。

× I want to sing for my friend because some song can give people love and I want to throw the song to express my love to my friend.

✓ I want to sing for my friend because some songs can give people love, and I want to sing the songs to express my love to my friend.

'some song'应为复数'some songs'；'throw the song'用词不当，应为'sing the songs'。

× Yes, I absolutely friend saying can bring happiness to people because uh singing is no rude and no judgment and just feel the beat and follow the rhythm.

✓ Yes, I absolutely think singing can bring happiness to people because singing is not rude and has no judgment; you just feel the beat and follow the rhythm.

'friend saying'无意义，应为'think singing'；'no rude and no judgment'应改为'not rude and has no judgment'；句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。