Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và thể hiện được cảm xúc cá nhân, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và câu dài dòng. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my feelings after work. Moreover, singing allows me to relax and unwind.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác hơn, tránh dùng từ không đúng ngữ cảnh như 'things care'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, I have learned to sing, but not through a professional course or teacher. Instead, I mostly learn from online tutorials and practice regularly. I believe my singing skills are quite good.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sắp xếp câu trả lời theo cấu trúc rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không chính xác và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

예시: I want to sing for my family, friends, teachers, and even my fans. At school, I have performed several times, so I think I have some fans who enjoy my singing.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và ý không hoàn chỉnh.

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions. For example, singing sad songs can help release feelings and make people feel better afterwards.

× Definitely yes.

✓ Definitely, yes.

The original sentence lacks a comma after 'Definitely' which is needed to separate the adverb from the interjection 'yes' for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× I really love singing and I think singing for me it is the way to express myself after working hours.

✓ I really love singing and I think singing is the way for me to express myself after working hours.

The phrase 'singing for me it is' is awkward and incorrect in English sentence structure. The correct form is 'singing is the way for me' to maintain proper subject-verb-object order.

× And it is also like when you sing, you can like unwind and relax.

✓ It is also like when you sing, you can unwind and relax.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally discouraged in formal English. Also, the repeated use of 'like' is unnecessary and informal. Removing 'And' and the extra 'like' improves clarity and formality.

× Yes, I have learned how to sing but it is not through like professional course or teacher.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing but it is not through a professional course or teacher.

The phrase 'like professional course or teacher' is incorrect. It should be 'a professional course or teacher' to correctly use the article and avoid informal 'like' in this context.

× I mostly like obtain it through the Internet like the tutorials online and I practice regularly.

✓ I mostly obtained it through the Internet, like online tutorials, and I practice regularly.

The verb 'obtain' should be in past tense 'obtained' to match the present perfect 'have learned'. Also, 'like the tutorials online' is better expressed as 'like online tutorials' for natural English.

× But I can say that my things care is very good.

✓ But I can say that my singing care is very good.

The phrase 'my things care' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error. Assuming the intended meaning is 'my singing care' or 'my singing skills', the sentence needs correction for clarity.

× I want to sing for my families, my friends, also my teachers and my fans.

✓ I want to sing for my family, my friends, also my teachers, and my fans.

'Families' is incorrect here; the singular 'family' is used to refer to one's relatives collectively. Also, commas are added for clarity in the list.

× Uh, I have represents they want to sing in school.

✓ Uh, I have represented them singing in school.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'I have represents they want to sing' is incorrect. The corrected sentence assumes the intended meaning is 'I have represented them singing in school'.

× So I do think I have some fans and also my friends all like to.

✓ So I do think I have some fans and also my friends all like it too.

The phrase 'like to' is incomplete and incorrect here. It should be 'like it too' to correctly express that friends also like the singing.

× I think yes singing symbol likes the meanings of happy like when you can sing it can express yourself and like tell you what is your emotion right now and then you can solve it through some songs.

✓ I think yes, singing symbolizes happiness because when you sing, you can express yourself and tell what your current emotions are, and then you can resolve them through some songs.

The original sentence is run-on and contains awkward phrasing such as 'singing symbol likes the meanings of happy'. The correction improves sentence structure, verb forms, and clarity.

× If you said you can use sad songs so you can be more happy or.

✓ If you feel sad, you can use sad songs so you can feel happier.

The original sentence is incomplete and uses incorrect tense and conjunctions. The correction provides a complete, grammatically correct sentence with proper conjunction use.