Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Votre réponse manque de fluidité naturelle et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire, suivie d'exemples précis, et évitez les répétitions inutiles.

예시: Yes, I love singing because it helps me learn new words. For instance, I have improved my English vocabulary by singing songs regularly.

제안: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus cohérente et exprimez clairement vos idées.

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I don't think it affects my enjoyment because singing is just a hobby for me. In fact, I often play the guitar and sing at the same time.

제안: Votre réponse est un peu longue et manque de clarté. Essayez de répondre directement à la question avec une phrase principale, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques en utilisant des mots de liaison.

예시: I usually sing for myself because it helps me express my feelings. Also, since I play the guitar, singing complements my musical skills.

제안: Votre réponse contient des erreurs de vocabulaire et de grammaire, et manque de précision. Utilisez un vocabulaire approprié et structurez votre réponse avec des exemples clairs et des mots de liaison.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music often expresses various emotions. For example, many popular songs have meaningful lyrics that can uplift listeners.

× Singing is always my best interest since little girl and it's because I can learn many new words.

✓ Singing has always been my best interest since I was a little girl because I can learn many new words.

The phrase 'since little girl' is incorrect; it should be 'since I was a little girl' to indicate time. Also, 'interest' is singular and correct here, but the sentence structure needs improvement for clarity.

× For example my English is learning by singing so.

✓ For example, I learn English by singing.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The subject and verb are misplaced. The corrected sentence uses proper subject-verb order and removes unnecessary words.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is a British English past tense form; 'learned' is American English. Both are correct, but consistency is important. Since the student uses 'learned' later, 'learned' is preferred here.

× No, I've never learned how to sing but I don't think it'll affect me to saying when I want to because it's like one of my hobby.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing, but I don't think it will affect my singing when I want to because it's one of my hobbies.

Incorrect use of 'to saying' should be 'my singing'. Also, 'one of my hobby' should be 'one of my hobbies' (plural). 'It'll' is expanded to 'it will' for clarity.

× It's not my profession so I don't think it'll affect me.

✓ It's not my profession, so I don't think it will affect me.

No plural issue here, but a comma is needed before 'so' to separate clauses properly.

× I often play guitar and sing at the same time.

✓ I often play the guitar and sing at the same time.

The noun 'guitar' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the instrument generally.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing to?

The verb 'sing' is usually followed by 'to' when indicating the audience.

× I always think for myself, I don't sing for anyone and most of the time I just want to express my feelings and just like I said, I play guitar so singing is adding point to those skills so it's good.

✓ I always think for myself; I don't sing for anyone. Most of the time, I just want to express my feelings. As I said, I play the guitar, so singing adds to those skills, which is good.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. It also misses articles before 'guitar' and uses awkward phrasing like 'adding point to those skills' which is corrected to 'adds to those skills'.

× I do think Shane can bring happiness to people and it can bring all kinds of emotion to anyone.

✓ I do think singing can bring happiness to people, and it can bring all kinds of emotions to anyone.

'Shane' is likely a typo for 'singing'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'all kinds of'.

× So just like those music online now, the music not like classical music, most music have those lyrics which can bring happiness to people.

✓ So, just like the music online now, which is not like classical music, most songs have lyrics that can bring happiness to people.

'Music' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'those music'. 'Most music have' is incorrect; 'most songs have' is correct. Also, 'those lyrics' is better as 'lyrics that' for clarity.