Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
I don't like singing because I don't have confidence in singing. When I sing in the public, I feel shy.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
No, I haven't, because I don't like singing. I prefer to learn to listen to music.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
Maybe I want to sing for my friend because when I sing for her, I don't have strength and we have happiness memories about singing together.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes, I think they can bring happiness and funding to people. For example, when I feel sad, I usually go to the Kalouk with my friend. It's very funny.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答时应避免重复表达“singing”，并且可以更自然地表达害羞的感觉。可以尝试用更丰富的词汇描述自己的感受，使回答更流畅自然。
예시: I don't enjoy singing because I lack confidence and feel quite nervous when performing in front of others.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中“learn to listen to music”表达不够准确，应改为更自然的表达方式。同时，回答可以更具体说明为什么不喜欢学唱歌。
예시: No, I haven't taken any singing lessons because I don't enjoy singing. Instead, I prefer to appreciate music by listening to it.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中“don't have strength”表达不清晰，且语法有误。建议用更准确的表达描述与朋友一起唱歌的愉快经历，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
예시: I would like to sing for my friend because singing together creates happy memories and makes me feel more relaxed.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中出现了拼写错误“funding”应为“fun”，且“Kalouk”可能是拼写错误或不明确的词。建议用更具体的例子说明唱歌如何带来快乐，并注意用词准确。
예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring joy to people. For instance, when I'm feeling down, I often sing with my friends, which always cheers me up.
문법
× Maybe I want to sing for my friend because when I sing for her, I don't have strength and we have happiness memories about singing together.
✓ Maybe I want to sing for my friend because when I sing for her, I don't have strength and we have happy memories about singing together.
这里的'happiness memories'中，'happiness'是名词，不能直接修饰'memories'。应使用形容词'happy'来修饰'memories'，表示'快乐的回忆'。这是形容词和名词搭配错误。
× I prefer to learn to listen to music.
✓ I prefer to learn by listening to music.
动词'learn'后面通常用介词'by'加动名词形式表示通过某种方式学习，'to listen to music'不符合习惯用法，应改为'by listening to music'。
× Maybe I want to sing for my friend because when I sing for her, I don't have strength and we have happiness memories about singing together.
✓ Maybe I want to sing for my friend because when I sing for her, I don't have strength and we have happy memories about singing together.
这里'friend'是单数，使用'her'作为代词是正确的，但整体句子表达不够清晰，建议保持代词一致且明确。
× It's very funny.
✓ It's very fun.
'funny'表示'有趣的，滑稽的'，通常指引起笑的事物；'fun'表示'有趣的，令人愉快的'，这里描述的是愉快的感觉，应该用'fun'。
× Yes, I think they can bring happiness and funding to people.
✓ Yes, I think it can bring happiness and fun to people.
句中'they'指代不明，前文谈论的是'singing'，应使用单数代词'it'。'funding'意为'资金'，应为'fun'表示'乐趣'。
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