Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复表达“for several reasons”，并且第二个理由“singing is not suitable for me”较模糊，建议具体说明原因。同时，句子结构可以更自然流畅。

예시: I don't really enjoy singing because I feel my voice isn't very pleasant compared to others, which makes me feel embarrassed. Also, I find it difficult to keep rhythm, so singing doesn't come naturally to me.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“prefer”应为“preferred”，“always singing”应为“always sang”。建议使用更准确的时态和表达，并且增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I'm not very interested in it. However, my mother loved singing when I was a child, and she often sang in front of me.

제안: 回答中表达重复且不够具体，如“for several reasons”后只给出一个理由。建议简洁明了地表达，并增加具体细节。

예시: I don't want to sing for anyone because I feel embarrassed and lack confidence, which makes me quite stressed.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，句子结构不够清晰，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和更连贯的句子结构。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people reduce stress and build confidence. For example, singing in a choir can create a sense of community and joy.

× my mother really prefer singing

✓ my mother really prefers singing

主语是单数第三人称“my mother”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“prefers”。

× she always singing in front of me

✓ she is always singing in front of me

动词“singing”前缺少助动词“is”，构成现在进行时态，表示经常发生的动作。

× I don't have interests towards this skill

✓ I don't have interest in this skill

“interest”后应接介词“in”，而非“towards”，且“interest”通常用单数形式。

× when I am singing to someone I will feel very embarrassed and lack of confidence

✓ when I am singing to someone, I will feel very embarrassed and lack confidence

“lack”后不需要介词“of”，直接接名词“confidence”。

× this will make me gain much stress

✓ this will make me feel very stressed

“make”后接宾语和动词原形，且“gain stress”表达不自然，改为“feel very stressed”更符合习惯用法。

× seeing can cultivate people's willpower

✓ singing can cultivate people's willpower

原句中“seeing”应为“singing”，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。

× Consequently, they can bring comfortable experience

✓ Consequently, it can bring a comfortable experience

主语“singing”是单数，代词应为“it”，且“experience”前需加冠词“a”，形容词“comfortable”修饰名词。