Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and minor grammar mistakes. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I don't like singing because I realized early on that I lack musical talent. Instead, I prefer listening to professional singers or playing records because I enjoy their performances more.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect understanding. Try to organize your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to explain your point logically.

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing. When I was young, my school only offered basic music classes that focused on music theory and appreciation, not singing lessons.

제안: Your answer is direct and relevant but could be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes to sound more fluent.

예시: I don't want to sing for anyone because, as I mentioned, I have no musical talent. When I sing, it sounds bad, so I prefer not to disturb others.

제안: Your answer shows good ideas but contains several grammar and word choice errors that reduce clarity. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structures, and connect your ideas with linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, professional singers in the entertainment industry use their voices and tone to make listeners feel joyful. Also, when I hear my partner singing, it makes me happy because I know he is in a good mood.

× No, I don't like singing because pretty early I already found out that I have no talent in music, I cannot sing very well and I cannot play musical instrument very well.

✓ No, I don't like singing because quite early I already found out that I have no talent in music; I cannot sing very well and I cannot play musical instruments very well.

The phrase 'pretty early' is informal and awkward here; 'quite early' is more appropriate. Also, 'musical instrument' should be plural 'musical instruments' because it refers generally to any instrument, not a specific one.

× So instead of saying in a weird way, I would prefer to listen to professional singers or play some records.

✓ So instead of singing in a weird way, I would prefer to listen to professional singers or play some records.

The phrase 'instead of saying in a weird way' is incorrect because 'saying' is not the correct verb here; it should be 'singing' to match the context. Also, the preposition 'in' is correctly used with 'a weird way'.

× No, I have never learned how to sing because when I was young I was school teach very basic music class.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because when I was young I was a school teacher teaching a very basic music class.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and missing articles. 'I was school teach' is incorrect; it should be 'I was a school teacher teaching' to correctly express the past role and action.

× We don't. They don't teach the same. They teach some music theory or some very basic aesthetic appreciation of music.

✓ We didn't. They didn't teach the same. They taught some music theory or some very basic aesthetic appreciation of music.

Since the context is past ('when I was young'), the verbs should be in past tense. 'We don't' and 'They don't' are present tense and inconsistent with the time frame.

× I don't want to sing for anybody. As I mentioned I have no talent in music, so when I sing it really sound bad, so I don't want to disturb anybody.

✓ I don't want to sing for anybody. As I mentioned, I have no talent in music, so when I sing it really sounds bad, so I don't want to disturb anybody.

The verb 'sound' should be 'sounds' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× Yes, I believe saying can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people.

The word 'saying' is incorrect here; it should be 'singing' to match the context of the question about singing.

× People love listening to their sayings because their voice, their reason and their tone can bring happiness to the listeners.

✓ People love listening to their singing because their voice, their rhythm, and their tone can bring happiness to the listeners.

'Sayings' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. Also, 'reason' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'rhythm' which relates to music.

× Also, when I hear my partner saying, I also feel happy because I know he's in a good mood.

✓ Also, when I hear my partner singing, I also feel happy because I know he's in a good mood.

Again, 'saying' is incorrect; it should be 'singing' to fit the context of music and singing.