Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然，但表达略显口语化且有语法错误，如“pressure from life”应为“pressure in life”。建议使用更准确的表达，并避免模糊的“some other good effects”，可以具体说明唱歌带来的积极影响。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and boosts my energy. Additionally, singing improves my mood and makes me feel more confident.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“practice from listen”应改为“practice by listening”。建议使用正确的语法结构，并且可以补充说明自学的具体方法或感受，使回答更丰富。

예시: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I practice by listening to professional singers and trying to imitate their techniques. This self-learning approach helps me improve gradually.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“who are who is”。建议使用正式表达代替“wanna”，并且简洁明了地列举对象，避免重复。

예시: I want to sing for my parents, teachers, close friends, and other important people in my life.

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，且表达不清晰。建议使用连词连接句子，明确表达观点，并举例说明唱歌带来的具体情感。

예시: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people. Moreover, it can inspire emotions like courage and help individuals face challenges with confidence.

× I practice from listen to other professional singers and learn by myself.

✓ I practice by listening to other professional singers and learn by myself.

这里应该使用动词的-ing形式作为介词"by"的宾语，"listen"应改为"listening"。

× some other people who are who is important to me.

✓ some other people who are important to me.

"people"是复数，后面应使用复数动词"are"，而不是单数"is"。

× it not only just happiness, it can bring some other emotions such as.

✓ it is not only happiness; it can bring some other emotions such as courage to face difficulties.

句子缺少谓语动词"is"，且"not only just"重复，应简化为"not only"。此外，句子结构不完整，需补充完整内容。