Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Yes, I like singing, even if I didn't have any talent in singing. But when when I see it, I can forgot all the problem, which upset me and I really enjoy the feeling. Yeah, I mean feel really.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
No, I haven't learned how to sing because I I think I don't have any talent for seeing it, and it's unnecessary for me to learn how to sing seriously. I just like sing to myself. Yeah, just to make my.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
Actually I just want to think for myself because I not good at singing so I'm so shy and I afraid to sit in front of others so I just for myself to seem to make my to make myself feel more better and relaxed.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes, definitely. In my opinion she can bring great happiness to people. As you can see, nowadays people under who are under great pressure are more likely to listen to music, because listen to music can help them forget any problem.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“when when I see it”应为“when I sing”，以及“forgot”应为“forget”。建议注意时态和单词拼写，避免重复和语法错误，同时使表达更流畅自然。
예시: Yes, I like singing even though I am not very talented at it. When I sing, I can forget all my problems and feel very happy and relaxed.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“talent for seeing it”应为“talent for singing”，句子未完整结束。建议注意句子完整性和正确使用词汇，避免重复和语法错误。
예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I don't think I have any talent for it. I just enjoy singing to myself for fun.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“want to think for myself”应为“want to sing for myself”，“I afraid to sit”应为“I am afraid to sing”。建议加强语法基础，注意句子结构和表达的逻辑性。
예시: Actually, I only want to sing for myself because I am not good at singing and I feel shy. Singing helps me feel better and more relaxed.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中出现代词错误，如“she”应为“it”，以及句子结构不够流畅。建议注意代词的正确使用和句子连贯性，使用连接词使表达更自然。
예시: Yes, definitely. In my opinion, singing can bring great happiness to people. For example, many people who are under a lot of pressure listen to music because it helps them forget their problems.
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