Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中有较多的语气词“uh”，影响流畅性。建议减少重复和语气词，句子结构应更完整，表达更自然。可以增加具体细节说明为什么喜欢藏族歌曲。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially Tibetan songs, because their melodies are soothing and help me relax. Singing makes me feel happy and allows me to forget my worries and anxiety.

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连词连接句子，避免重复。

예시: No, I have never had the chance to learn singing formally, but I often listen to music on my iPhone and try to imitate the sounds to practice.

제안: 回答中断且不完整，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议完整表达想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: It depends on the occasion. Sometimes, I sing for my colleagues at summer college parties to show my appreciation. Other times, I sing for my parents to express my love and gratitude.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不完整。建议用完整句子表达观点，避免重复，增加具体原因和例子。

예시: Absolutely. I believe singing brings happiness by creating a joyful atmosphere during gatherings. It helps people relax and connect with each other.

× I like singing, uh, especially I like singing, uh, Tibetan songs and when I, uh, singing, I feel like, uh, relaxed and happy.

✓ I like singing, uh, especially I like singing, uh, Tibetan songs and when I, uh, sing, I feel relaxed and happy.

这里动词形式错误，'when I singing' 应改为 'when I sing'，因为在表示习惯或一般事实时，动词应使用原形或第三人称单数形式。

× It's make me uh.

✓ It makes me uh.

主谓不一致，'It' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 -s，故应为 'makes'。

× I uh, have not uh, an opportunity to uh, learn how to sing, but uh, when the I always uh, listen to music from my iPhone and uh, also, uh, to repeat some sounds.

✓ I uh, have not uh, an opportunity to uh, learn how to sing, but uh, I always uh, listen to music from my iPhone and uh, also, uh, repeat some sounds.

句中 'when the I' 结构错误，应去掉 'when the'，保持句子通顺。

× Sometimes in a summer parties, uh, the college party, I always, uh, singing for my colleagues to express my, uh, appreciation.

✓ Sometimes in summer parties, uh, the college party, I always, uh, sing for my colleagues to express my, uh, appreciation.

动词形式错误，'I always singing' 应改为 'I always sing'，因为 'always' 后应接动词原形。

× Sometimes in a summer parties, uh, the college party, I always, uh, singing for my colleagues to express my, uh, appreciation.

✓ Sometimes in summer parties, uh, the college party, I always, uh, sing for my colleagues to express my, uh, appreciation.

'a summer parties' 中 'a' 是单数冠词，'parties' 是复数名词，二者不匹配，应去掉 'a'。

× And sometimes I also, uh, singing for my, uh, parents to have a.

✓ And sometimes I also, uh, sing for my, uh, parents.

动词形式错误，'I also singing' 应改为 'I also sing'，因为主语是第一人称单数，谓语动词应为原形。句尾 'to have a' 不完整，建议删除。

× It depends on situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

'on situation' 缺少冠词，'situation' 是单数名词，前面应加定冠词 'the'。

× I think thinking really bring happiness to people, make make their atmosphere more joyful and hard.

✓ I think singing really brings happiness to people, makes their atmosphere more joyful and hard.

'thinking' 应为 'singing'，且谓语动词应与主语一致，'bring' 和 'make' 应改为 'brings' 和 'makes'。

× make make their atmosphere more joyful and hard.

✓ make their atmosphere more joyful and warm.

'hard' 用于形容气氛不合适，应改为 'warm' 表示温暖、热烈的氛围。

× It's a very important for when people gathering and also it's also important when people.

✓ It's very important when people gather, and also it's important when people are together.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，'when people gathering' 应改为 'when people gather'，'when people' 后应补充谓语和宾语使句子完整。