Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免重复表达。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使回答更自然流畅。

예시: I don't enjoy singing because I'm not very good at it. However, I love listening to music when I feel stressed, as it helps me relax and feel energized.

제안: 回答中出现了语法错误和表达不清的问题。应直接回答问题，并用正确的词汇表达兴趣和原因。

예시: No, I have never learned to sing because I am not interested in singing. I prefer just listening to music.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇，且句子未完整结束。应避免重复，使用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: I would like to sing for my parents because they love and support me unconditionally, which means a lot to me.

제안: 回答中有语音停顿和重复词，影响流畅度。应避免口头语，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing is a great way for people to relieve stress and relax, especially since many young people face a lot of pressure nowadays.

× Music give me power.

✓ Music gives me power.

主语是不可数名词music，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式gives，表示单数动作。

× I like listening music when I feel stressed and upset.

✓ I like listening to music when I feel stressed and upset.

动词listen后应接介词to，构成固定搭配listen to，表示“听”。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

learn的过去分词在美式英语中通常写作learned，符合现代用法。

× I haven't because I am not interested in seeing.

✓ I haven't because I am not interested in singing.

原句中的seeing应为singing，语义错误，导致表达不清。

× Singing is not best singing.

✓ Singing is not the best.

缺少定冠词the，且重复使用singing不合适，应简化表达。

× Actually, I want to sing for my parents because they love me so much and they always support me and give me encouragement and support and.

✓ Actually, I want to sing for my parents because they love me so much and always support me and give me encouragement.

句子末尾多余的and导致结构不完整，应删除多余部分使句子完整。

× For someone who likes singing, it is a good way to release, suggest, suggest and uh, uh, relax themselves.

✓ For someone who likes singing, it is a good way to release stress and relax themselves.

句中重复使用suggest且无意义，应删除多余词汇，表达更清晰。