Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say you enjoy singing privately and explain why, using linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I like singing, but only when I am alone, such as in the bathroom. Because I feel shy singing in front of others, I prefer to enjoy my own voice privately. This way, I can relax and have fun without worrying about being judged.

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit confusing and lacks clarity. Use simpler sentences and explain your experience clearly. Also, avoid unnecessary details and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, two months ago, I downloaded an app that plays background music and asks you to sing along. It helps me practice singing in a fun way.

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and provide specific details with linking words.

예시: If I had a chance to sing for someone, I would choose my best friend. I would sing a song about love or friendship, especially on her birthday, to show how much I appreciate her.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and grammatical errors. Use clear sentences with linking words and avoid redundancy. Also, provide specific reasons to support your opinion.

예시: Undoubtedly, singing brings happiness to people because listening to different songs can heal emotions and improve mood. That is why many people enjoy listening to music regularly.

× I don't like thinking around the people, but I'm a bathroom singer.

✓ I don't like singing around people, but I'm a bathroom singer.

The word 'thinking' is incorrect here; the student likely meant 'singing'. Also, 'the people' is incorrect; it should be 'people' without 'the' as it refers to people in general.

× I like to sing in my private place where anyone don't listen my voice.

✓ I like to sing in my private place where no one listens to my voice.

'Anyone don't listen my voice' is incorrect. 'Anyone' should be 'no one' to indicate nobody listens. Also, 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object.

× I just listen.

✓ I just listen to myself.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'to myself' clarifies that the student listens to their own voice.

× I just like to listen my voice on just my own and I don't want to don't want anyone to listen my voice.

✓ I just like to listen to my voice on my own and I don't want anyone to listen to my voice.

'Listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'on just my own' is awkward; 'on my own' is correct. The phrase 'I don't want to don't want' is repetitive and should be simplified.

× No, I have not learned how to sing, but around two months ago I I have installed one app of same game in which they just put the background music of the song and ask you to sing the song of that particular voice.

✓ No, I have not learned how to sing, but around two months ago I installed an app of the same game in which they put the background music of the song and ask you to sing along with that particular voice.

The past action 'installed' should be in simple past tense, not present perfect. Also, 'one app of same game' should be 'an app of the same game'. The sentence is long and needs slight restructuring for clarity.

× As I mentioned earlier, I don't know that you want to listen my voice, but if I would get a chance to sing where I would definitely sing for my best friend of need and which would be a song of love or friendship, I'll definitely try that And on on her own May maybe on her birthday.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I don't know if you want to listen to my voice, but if I got a chance to sing, I would definitely sing for my best friend in need, and it would be a song about love or friendship. I'll definitely try that, maybe on her birthday.

'Listen my voice' should be 'listen to my voice'. 'If I would get' is incorrect; it should be 'if I got' for conditional past. 'Best friend of need' should be 'best friend in need'. The sentence is long and needs punctuation and restructuring for clarity.

× Undoubtedly it too brings happiness to people as listening different song heals the people from inside and also it also it brings the mood up to the heights where that's the reason most of the people like to listen songs.

✓ Undoubtedly, it also brings happiness to people as listening to different songs heals people from inside and also lifts the mood to great heights. That's the reason most people like to listen to songs.

'Listening different song' should be 'listening to different songs'. 'It also it also it' is repetitive and incorrect. 'Brings the mood up to the heights' is awkward; 'lifts the mood to great heights' is better. 'Most of the people' should be 'most people'. 'Listen songs' should be 'listen to songs'.