Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达情感。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress. Some songs resonate with my feelings, allowing me to express my emotions through singing.

제안: 回答简洁但缺乏细节。建议增加一些具体信息，如为什么忙碌，或者是否有计划学习唱歌。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally because I have been very busy with my studies. However, I hope to take singing lessons in the future when I have more free time.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，使用连贯的句子表达想法。

예시: I want to sing the song 'Beyond' from the film Moana 2 for myself. It inspires me to never stop choosing who I am.

제안: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复，并清楚表达观点。

예시: Absolutely. Singing can help people relieve anxiety and feel happier. Also, receiving praise for singing well can boost our confidence and joy.

× Yes, I really like singing because it's a perfect way to help me to stress out and and some songs just have the same feel feeling with me and I can express my emotion by singing.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because it's a perfect way to help me relieve stress and some songs just have the same feeling as me and I can express my emotions by singing.

这里“help me to stress out”中的“stress out”用法不当，应该用“relieve stress”表示“减轻压力”。“feel feeling”重复且用词错误，应改为“feeling”。此外，“express my emotion”应为复数“emotions”，因为情感通常是复数。建议用更地道的表达方式。

× No I haven't. I am so busy so I have no time to attend some after class activities.

✓ No, I haven't. I am so busy that I have no time to attend any after-class activities.

“so I have no time to attend some after class activities”中，因果关系表达不完整，应该用“so that”或“that”引导结果状语从句。此外，“some”在否定句中不合适，应改为“any”。“after class”应加连字符，变为“after-class”。

× I want to sing for myself a song named Beyond from from the film Moana 2. I want to I want to sing it for me and told and tell me never stop choosing who we are.

✓ I want to sing a song named 'Beyond' from the film Moana 2 for myself. I want to sing it to myself and tell myself to never stop choosing who we are.

“sing for myself a song”语序不正确，应该是“sing a song for myself”。“from from”重复，应删去一个“from”。“sing it for me and told and tell me”中“for me”应为“to myself”，“told and tell me”时态和结构混乱，应统一为“tell myself”。代词使用不当，需改正。

× Absolutely, seeing can help people to release their anxiety and we are also glad to hear if you hear somebody praised us if if we sing so very good.

✓ Absolutely, singing can help people release their anxiety and we are also glad to hear if somebody praises us when we sing very well.

“seeing”应为“singing”，是拼写错误。动词“help”后面不需要“to”，应直接用动词原形“release”。“hear if you hear somebody praised us”结构重复且时态错误，应改为“hear if somebody praises us”。“sing so very good”中“good”应为副词“well”。