Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
I like singing, not that, not that much, because I can say that I am not a good singer and I'm not into music. I'm into sports and I don't like much singing.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Yes, I learned how to see. However, I'm not a good singer and my voice is not that good. That is why I'm not into music.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
I don't really like to sing because I don't have a good voice and I'm not into music. I prefer sports because it makes me active and healthy rather than singing. But sometimes I do sing if I feel too.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it relieves stress by seeing their heart out. At the same time, this kind of stress reliever listening to good music will make us feel.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 55.0제안: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add a reason with linking words. Avoid repeating phrases and be more natural in your expression. For example, start with 'I don't really like singing because...' and then explain why.
예시: I don't really like singing because I'm not confident in my voice. Instead, I prefer sports since they keep me active and healthy.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 60.0제안: Make sure to answer the question clearly and avoid mistakes like 'see' instead of 'sing'. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to connect ideas smoothly.
예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing, but I'm not very good at it, so I don't enjoy music much.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 50.0제안: Answer the question directly by naming a person or group you would sing for, even if it's hypothetical. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating previous points.
예시: I don't usually sing for others, but if I had to, I would sing for my family to make them happy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 65.0제안: Try to use correct phrases like 'singing their heart out' and complete your sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to make your answer coherent and clear.
예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relieve stress by singing their heart out. Also, listening to good music can improve our mood.
문법
× Yes, I learned how to see.
✓ Yes, I learned how to sing.
The student mistakenly used 'see' instead of 'sing'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar tense error, but since it affects the meaning, it needs correction. The verb 'learned' is correctly in past tense, matching the question about past learning.
× because it relieves stress by seeing their heart out.
✓ because it relieves stress by singing their heart out.
The phrase 'seeing their heart out' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'singing their heart out'. The verb 'sing' should be in the -ing form here to indicate the action causing stress relief.
× At the same time, this kind of stress reliever listening to good music will make us feel.
✓ At the same time, this kind of stress reliever, listening to good music, will make us feel better.
The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding commas and the word 'better' completes the thought and improves sentence structure, making it clear that listening to good music is a stress reliever that improves feelings.
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