Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更流畅自然。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieves my stress.

제안: 回答中时态使用错误，句子不完整且重复。建议使用正确的时态和完整句子表达经历。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school.

제안: 回答中代词使用混乱，句子冗长且重复。建议明确代词，简洁表达原因，并避免重复。

예시: I want to sing for my mom because she is the most important person in my life and enjoys listening to my voice.

제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，存在语法错误和词汇错误。建议完整表达观点，使用正确词汇和句子结构。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people reduce stress and feel joyful.

× I like singing is a good way to make me feel relax and when I am seeing I can feel my stress go out run out.

✓ I like singing because it is a good way to make me feel relaxed, and when I am singing I can feel my stress go away.

动词后面需要用动名词形式作主语或宾语，且形容词relax应为过去分词relaxed来表示状态；seeing应为singing，且stress go out应改为go away表示压力消失。

× when I am a primary school students, I learn.

✓ When I was a primary school student, I learned.

主语student应为单数形式，因为指的是“我”这个单一学生。

× when I am a primary school students, I learn. I learned singing.

✓ When I was a primary school student, I learned singing.

描述过去的动作时，动词应使用过去时态，am应改为was，learn应改为learned。

× I want to sing for my mom because he is the most important people in my life and he likes me and she likes my voice and she likes listening to my singing.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because she is the most important person in my life, and she likes me, and she likes my voice and listening to my singing.

mom是女性，代词应使用she；people是复数，需改为单数person。

× he is the most important people in my life

✓ she is the most important person in my life

people是复数，指多人，句中应使用单数person来指代单一的妈妈。

× people always think seeing because seeing is a good way to reduce stress and make a.

✓ people always think singing because singing is a good way to reduce stress and make them happy.

动词think后面应接动名词形式singing；句子不完整，补充完整表达。