Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“don't like singing”重复出现。语法错误如“a quiet people”应为“a quiet person”。建议用更自然的表达方式，简洁明了地说明原因。

예시: No, I don't enjoy singing because I lack confidence in my singing ability and I am a quiet person who prefers not to perform in front of others.

제안: 回答中时态不一致，如“learned”和“play”应统一。句子结构不够清晰，建议用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I have been busy learning dancing, drawing, and playing the piano, so I haven't had time to practice singing.

제안: 表达中有语法和词汇错误，如“closed person”应为“close people”。句子结构混乱，建议简化并使用正确词汇。

예시: I would like to sing for my close friends and family because I feel comfortable sharing my singing with them.

제안: 回答中有多处语法和拼写错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，句子不连贯。建议使用简单清晰的句子表达观点。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and feel more confident.

× And I am a quiet people.

✓ And I am a quiet person.

people 是复数形式，表示多个人，而这里主语是单数的 I，应该用单数形式 person。

× No, because I sometimes learned dancing and drawing and play the piano, so I don't have time to learn singing.

✓ No, because I sometimes learned dancing and drawing and played the piano, so I don't have time to learn singing.

learned 和 play 在这里都表示过去的动作，时态应保持一致，play 应改为过去式 played。

× I want to sing for my friends or my parents because they are my closed person, their closed person for me, so I only want to sing for them.

✓ I want to sing for my friends or my parents because they are my close people, and they are close to me, so I only want to sing for them.

closed 是形容词，意思是“关闭的”，应使用 close 表示“亲近的”；person 单数不合适，friends 和 parents 是复数，应使用 people。

× I want to sing for my friends or my parents because they are my closed person, their closed person for me, so I only want to sing for them.

✓ I want to sing for my friends or my parents because they are my close people, and they are close to me, so I only want to sing for them.

原句中 'their closed person for me' 结构不正确，应该用 'they are close to me' 来表达他们对我亲近。

× Yes, because some people like singing, they think seeing can be can be the them happiness and seeing can help them brave, so they like it.

✓ Yes, because some people like singing, they think singing can bring them happiness and singing can help them be brave, so they like it.

原句中 'seeing' 应为 'singing'，且 'can be can be the them happiness' 结构错误，应改为 'can bring them happiness'；'help them brave' 应为 'help them be brave'。