Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达自信和学习经历。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing very much because I have learned it before and feel confident in my ability.

제안: 回答中时态混用且表达不够流畅，建议使用正确的时态，简洁明了地说明学习经历和收获。

예시: Yes, I learned singing when I was in junior school, and my teacher taught me many useful skills that helped me improve.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时注意句子简洁。

예시: I like to sing for my friends because we all enjoy singing together. This way, we can give each other feedback, which boosts my confidence.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议理清句子结构，补充完整的观点，并使用恰当的连接词。

예시: Yes, singing can make people happy. For example, my family has a tradition of singing together during lunch, which brings us joy and strengthens our bond.

× Of course, I really like singing songs and because I'm very confident to my singing ability, I have that skills, you know, and because I learn sing before, so I'm very confident about my scene.

✓ Of course, I really like singing songs because I'm very confident in my singing ability. I have those skills, you know, and because I have learned to sing before, I'm very confident about my singing.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用正确的形式。这里'singing'用得对，但后面'learn sing'应改为'learned to sing'，因为动词'learn'后面接不定式'to sing'。另外，'confident to'应改为'confident in'，这是固定搭配。

× Of course, I really like singing songs and because I'm very confident to my singing ability, I have that skills, you know, and because I learn sing before, so I'm very confident about my scene.

✓ Of course, I really like singing songs because I'm very confident in my singing ability. I have those skills, you know, and because I have learned to sing before, I'm very confident about my singing.

'that skills'中'skills'是复数，前面的限定词应为'those'而非'that'。

× Of course, I really like singing songs and because I'm very confident to my singing ability, I have that skills, you know, and because I learn sing before, so I'm very confident about my scene.

✓ Of course, I really like singing songs because I'm very confident in my singing ability. I have those skills, you know, and because I have learned to sing before, I'm very confident about my singing.

描述过去经历时，动词应使用过去时态。'learn'应改为'learned'。

× Of course, I really like singing songs and because I'm very confident to my singing ability, I have that skills, you know, and because I learn sing before, so I'm very confident about my scene.

✓ Of course, I really like singing songs because I'm very confident in my singing ability. I have those skills, you know, and because I have learned to sing before, I'm very confident about my singing.

'confident'后面应接介词'in'表示对某事有信心，不能用'to'。

× Of course, I really like singing songs and because I'm very confident to my singing ability, I have that skills, you know, and because I learn sing before, so I'm very confident about my scene.

✓ Of course, I really like singing songs because I'm very confident in my singing ability. I have those skills, you know, and because I have learned to sing before, I'm very confident about my singing.

'my scene'应为'my singing'，'scene'用词不当，应使用正确的名词。

× Just as I said before, I have learned same before when I'm a Junior School student and I think my teacher teach me a lot of singing skills and it helps me to it helped me to improve my singing skill.

✓ Just as I said before, I learned the same when I was a Junior School student. I think my teacher taught me a lot of singing skills and it helped me to improve my singing skill.

描述过去事件时，动词应使用过去时态。'have learned'改为'learned'，'I'm'改为'was'，'teach'改为'taught'，'helps'改为'helped'。

× Just as I said before, I have learned same before when I'm a Junior School student and I think my teacher teach me a lot of singing skills and it helps me to it helped me to improve my singing skill.

✓ Just as I said before, I learned the same when I was a Junior School student. I think my teacher taught me a lot of singing skills and it helped me to improve my singing skill.

'same'前应加定冠词'the'，表示特指。

× Just as I said before, I have learned same before when I'm a Junior School student and I think my teacher teach me a lot of singing skills and it helps me to it helped me to improve my singing skill.

✓ Just as I said before, I learned the same when I was a Junior School student. I think my teacher taught me a lot of singing skills and it helped me to improve my singing skill.

'I'm'应改为过去时'was'，因为描述的是过去的情况。

× Just as I said before, I have learned same before when I'm a Junior School student and I think my teacher teach me a lot of singing skills and it helps me to it helped me to improve my singing skill.

✓ Just as I said before, I learned the same when I was a Junior School student. I think my teacher taught me a lot of singing skills and it helped me to improve my singing skill.

'teach'应改为过去式'taught'，'helps'应改为过去式'helped'，保持时态一致。

× Who do you want to sing for? Actually, I want to sing for my friends because my friends and I all love singing, so we all sing together and we can get feedback from each other and it can make me more confident.

✓ Actually, I want to sing for my friends because my friends and I all love singing, so we all sing together and we can get feedback from each other, which can make me more confident.

'it'指代不明确，应使用'which'指代前面的整个句子。

× Actually, I want to sing for my friends because my friends and I all love singing, so we all sing together and we can get feedback from each other and it can make me more confident.

✓ Actually, I want to sing for my friends because my friends and I all love singing, so we all sing together and we can get feedback from each other, which can make me more confident.

'make me more confident'中，'confident'是形容词，前面不需要介词。

× Yes, of course seeing can make people feel happy just like when people gathering together, just like my family and we get together to have a lunch and we also will have a tradition to sing together and this make us feel.

✓ Yes, of course singing can make people feel happy, just like when people gather together. For example, my family and I get together to have lunch, and we also have a tradition of singing together, which makes us feel happy.

'seeing'应为'singing'，'people gathering'应为'people gather'，'this make'应为'this makes'，保持主谓一致。

× Yes, of course seeing can make people feel happy just like when people gathering together, just like my family and we get together to have a lunch and we also will have a tradition to sing together and this make us feel.

✓ Yes, of course singing can make people feel happy, just like when people gather together. For example, my family and I get together to have lunch, and we also have a tradition of singing together, which makes us feel happy.

主语和动词要保持一致，'this'是单数，动词应为'makes'。

× Yes, of course seeing can make people feel happy just like when people gathering together, just like my family and we get together to have a lunch and we also will have a tradition to sing together and this make us feel.

✓ Yes, of course singing can make people feel happy, just like when people gather together. For example, my family and I get together to have lunch, and we also have a tradition of singing together, which makes us feel happy.

'have a lunch'中'lunch'作为不可数名词，不需要冠词'a'。