Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“want to listening”应为“want to listen”，且表达不够自然和连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because I like listening to K-pop music. It suits my taste, and sometimes I like to sing and dance along with the songs.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不准确，如“will to watch”应为“watch”，句子结构混乱。建议使用更清晰的句子，合理使用连接词，使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, sometimes I learn to sing by following music, and other times I watch beginner-friendly videos on social media. I find these step-by-step tutorials very helpful.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“It is depends”应为“It depends”，且句子连接不够自然。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增强逻辑性。

예시: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I sing for my family because it creates a good atmosphere, and other times I sing for performances to showcase my skills and introduce myself.

제안: 回答中存在多处语法和用词错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，“improve my mood more happy”表达不自然。建议简化句子，使用正确词汇，并注意句子结构。

예시: Absolutely, I think singing is a good way to express emotions and improve my mood. It can also communicate feelings and thoughts to others in social situations.

× I really like singing because sometimes I want to listening some K pop music.

✓ I really like singing because sometimes I want to listen to some K pop music.

动词want后面应接动词原形或不定式，不能直接接动名词listening。且动词listen后应加介词to，表示“听某物”。

× I want to listening this music and take a dance together.

✓ I want to listen to this music and dance together.

动词want后应接动词原形或不定式，不能用listening。动词listen后应加介词to。动词take a dance不自然，改为dance更合适。

× sometime I will follow the music to learn how to sing and other times I will to watch some videos on the social media and like the friendly beginner friendly to step by step with these videos.

✓ Sometimes I will follow the music to learn how to sing, and other times I will watch some videos on social media and like the beginner-friendly step-by-step videos.

sometime应为复数形式sometimes。will后不加to。social media前不加the。beginner friendly应改为复合形容词beginner-friendly。句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。

× It is depends on the situations.

✓ It depends on the situations.

depends是动词，前面不需要it is，直接用it作为主语即可。

× Sometimes I want to sing for my family, it can improve the atmosphere but other times I want to sing for the performance.

✓ Sometimes I want to sing for my family; it can improve the atmosphere, but other times I want to sing for a performance.

performance前应加不定冠词a，表示某次表演。句子中应使用分号或句号分隔两个独立分句。

× It can show my skill and introduce myself.

✓ It can show my skills and introduce me.

skill应为复数skills，表示技能。introduce后接宾格代词me，而不是反身代词myself。

× I think seeing is a good way to show my emotions and improve my mood more happy in the future.

✓ I think singing is a good way to show my emotions and improve my mood to be happier in the future.

seeing应为singing，符合语境。more happy应改为happier，比较级形式。动词improve后接不定式表达目的。

× And I also think as a language can express many things like your emotion and your thought in the social.

✓ And I also think singing as a language can express many things like your emotions and your thoughts in society.

句中缺少主语singing。emotion和thought应为复数形式。in the social表达不自然，改为in society更合适。