Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法有误，如“would singing”应为“would sing”，且表达略显重复和不够简洁。建议注意动词形式和句子简洁性，避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing. Sometimes I go to KTV with my friends, and we have a great time. Also, when I'm in a good mood, I like to sing at home.

제안: 回答结构较好，但“by listening I would learn”表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I learn by listening to music. For example, I often imitate my favorite singers to improve my skills.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“to singing”应为“to sing”，且表达略显重复。建议注意动词不定式的正确使用，并尝试丰富表达。

예시: I usually sing for myself because I feel embarrassed singing in front of friends. I'm afraid they might judge me if I sing badly, so I prefer singing alone.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“it make me relax”应为“it makes me relax”，“like to listening”应为“like listening”。句子结构不够清晰，建议加强语法准确性和句子连贯性。

예시: Yes, definitely. Whenever I'm in a bad mood, I sing to myself because it helps me relax. I also enjoy listening to music and learning new songs.

× And in my daily lives when I am in a good mood, I would singing.

✓ And in my daily life when I am in a good mood, I would sing.

这里的动词“singing”用法错误，应该用动词原形“sing”来表示习惯性动作。此外，“daily lives”应改为单数形式“daily life”，因为这里指的是个人的日常生活。

× I worry that they may judge me and I might sing badly, so I feel more comfortable to singing alone.

✓ I worry that they may judge me and I might sing badly, so I feel more comfortable singing alone.

动词“singing”前不需要介词“to”，因为“feel comfortable”后直接跟动名词形式。去掉“to”后，表达更自然正确。

× Yes, definitely whenever I'm in a bad mood I would think for myself and it make me relax and also I like to listening to music and to learn new songs.

✓ Yes, definitely whenever I'm in a bad mood I would think for myself and it makes me relax and also I like listening to music and to learn new songs.

“make”应改为第三人称单数形式“makes”，因为主语是“it”。“like to listening”中“to”与动名词“listening”搭配错误，应改为“like listening”。

× Yes, definitely whenever I'm in a bad mood I would think for myself and it make me relax and also I like to listening to music and to learn new songs.

✓ Yes, definitely whenever I'm in a bad mood I would think for myself and it makes me relax and also I like listening to music and to learn new songs.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“makes”，这是主谓一致的基本语法规则。