Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且表达了个人感受，但句子结构稍显简单，且存在语法错误（如"could make me feel"应为"makes me feel"）。建议使用更准确的时态和连接词，使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and feel at ease. Since I was a child, I have dreamed of becoming a singer.

제안: 回答内容明确，但存在语法错误（"haven't have"应为"haven't had"），且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing because it is expensive, and my parents couldn't afford the lessons, so I never had the chance.

제안: 回答表达了感情，但句子结构混乱，存在语法错误和重复（如"show my love thanks to their love"）。建议简化表达，使用清晰的句子结构和连接词。

예시: I want to sing for my parents to express my gratitude and love because they have given me a warm and caring family.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误（"could rap people"应为"can help people"，"emotion emotions"重复），且表达不够清晰。建议使用准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达观点。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people feel relaxed and express their emotions.

× Yes, I like singing very much because I think singing could make me feel comfortable and calm down.

✓ Yes, I like singing very much because I think singing can make me feel comfortable and calm down.

这里使用情态动词时，表示一般现在时的能力或可能性，应该用"can"而不是"could"。"could"通常表示过去的能力或假设。

× And I have a dream in my childhood that I want to be a singer.

✓ And I had a dream in my childhood that I wanted to be a singer.

描述过去的事情时，动词时态应使用过去时，"have"和"want"应改为过去式"had"和"wanted"。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing because the expense is large and my parents can't afford it, so I haven't have the chance to learn to sing.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because the expense is large and my parents can't afford it, so I haven't had the chance to learn to sing.

"haven't have"是不正确的时态搭配，应使用现在完成时的过去分词形式"had"。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ For whom do you want to sing?

正式英语中，介词不宜放在句尾，应该将"for"提前，改为"For whom"。

× I want to sing for my parents because I want to show my gratitude to them and show my love thanks to their love and give me a loving family.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because I want to show my gratitude to them and show my love thanks to their love and for giving me a loving family.

句中"give me a loving family"缺少介词，且表达不完整，应改为"for giving me a loving family"，使句子结构完整。

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing could rap people feel comfortable and express their emotion emotions.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing can make people feel comfortable and express their emotions.

"rap"用错，应为"make"；"emotion emotions"重复，应为复数"emotions"。此外，情态动词"could"改为"can"更符合语境。